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kkg
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Interesting premise, I don't mind that it borrows from Fallout and other apocalyptic genres. World building is so-so, doesn't delve much into it even past Chap 90. Major problem with character development. MC is pretty useless, has no redeeming qualities/talents/virtues. It's fine if MC just wants to be rich and successful, but it keeps ****** you wonder why MC is randomly being given this opportunity to cross worlds and borrow technology/resources from each side. He is only a human mule moving resources between worlds. We empathize with all protagonists because there's something in them that resonates with us, or that we aspire to be (hardworking, etc). This MC has nothing. When he becomes rich, his parents are completely ignored (or at least omitted from the novel), just many many MANY chapters of self-gratification. MC laters ends up just thinking with his d**k and collects women for no other reason than just because he can. MC constantly thinks to himself that he should stop. Then he keeps collecting more women. It also wander into loli/semi-pedophilic areas, probably from the sexual fetishes of the author and readers (around chap 85+). I think there are plenty of ***** novels around if people are into that. Pretty lame to see it here.

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Ancient_God
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Don't worry mate, because many of the readers don't like the useless MC you mention, he has ben replaced with someone else who has the same name. From a sales in clothing store, he has now become a master in physic, biologist, tech guy, master of modern warfare an tactics, master in bussiness and bussiness laws, also a prodigy in politics and all that happened overnight with no explanation. I really guess that the MC has been replaced

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JSJJ
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Lol I haven't even read it yet but your comment is hilarious!

Ancient_God:Don't worry mate, because many of the readers don't like the useless MC you mention, he has ben replaced with someone else who has the same name. From a sales in clothing store, he has now become a master in physic, biologist, tech guy, master of modern warfare an tactics, master in bussiness and bussiness laws, also a prodigy in politics and all that happened overnight with no explanation. I really guess that the MC has been replaced
Ancient_God
Ancient_GodLv6Ancient_God

Hahaha It's true though. You will see once you read it. A question, in a novel, how dou you know an MC in the middle of the story is THE MC from the begining of the story? By the MC's name and personality and capabality, right? I suspect the MC in this story has been replaced by the author with someone with a same name but personality and capability 100 times better. How do I prove that the MC has been replaced? I can't. But how do people prove that he is not replaced? They can't too. Because none of us can see the MC's face as to prove his id, all we got is the name, same name, different person

JSJJ:Lol I haven't even read it yet but your comment is hilarious!
JSJJ
JSJJLv12JSJJ

Agree

Ancient_God:Hahaha It's true though. You will see once you read it. A question, in a novel, how dou you know an MC in the middle of the story is THE MC from the begining of the story? By the MC's name and personality and capabality, right? I suspect the MC in this story has been replaced by the author with someone with a same name but personality and capability 100 times better. How do I prove that the MC has been replaced? I can't. But how do people prove that he is not replaced? They can't too. Because none of us can see the MC's face as to prove his id, all we got is the name, same name, different person
HisMajestyTheYama
HisMajestyTheYamaLv5HisMajestyTheYama

Is this kingdom building?

TheMundaneGuy
TheMundaneGuyLv6TheMundaneGuy

I agree mc is worthless.. But like mc's from other novels are better. Hmph. So many arrogant assholes be like 'just you wait in future I will definitely kill you' blah blah blah... At least this guy's personality is refreshing compared to others

KoolAid
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How do you tag a spoiler on this site? been trying to figure that out.

Adicawida
AdicawidaLv12Adicawida

Where'd all these mastery came from? As far as I know he just delegated his tasks to people who knows and understand things better...

Ancient_God:Don't worry mate, because many of the readers don't like the useless MC you mention, he has ben replaced with someone else who has the same name. From a sales in clothing store, he has now become a master in physic, biologist, tech guy, master of modern warfare an tactics, master in bussiness and bussiness laws, also a prodigy in politics and all that happened overnight with no explanation. I really guess that the MC has been replaced
Ancient_God
Ancient_GodLv6Ancient_God

It's a one thing if he only tells his subordinate what to do (delegated the task to his subordinates), but he also tells them how to do it. And even those from apocalypse military background such as in colonel rank falls to the mc's military strategy of taking over the colonel's shelter and men without a fight, just by using some propaganda. Now, which one is it the "delegated" you mentioned?

Adicawida:Where'd all these mastery came from? As far as I know he just delegated his tasks to people who knows and understand things better...
Adicawida
AdicawidaLv12Adicawida

Lets list it, then - master of physics: he's a mechanical engineering student, so it's not impossible for him to master some physics - biologist: where did this came from? I don't see him doing any biology work at all - tech guy: if buying a phone and then throwing it into the phone developer to develop a new OS could be called being a tech guy then sure he is - master of modern warfare and tactics: if you call overwhelming air superiority and ballistic missile tactics, then sure he is. I myself called it technological superiority. And the fallout shelter was made to fall, it's a social experiment where their second leader will be painted as the "demonic ruler who rose to power after the sacrifice of the wise king". He's basically exploiting the flaw on the "demonic ruler"s character. Or maybe you meant the fight on the modern world, where he basically stumbles to use his genetical and technological advantage to get even a small bit of advantage when saving Robert? -business and business law master: he left his business to be taken care of by the CEO and took a hands-off approach, and his understanding of business law is basically as long as you have good product and strong government backing, then you're okay -politics: gotta admit author is pulling quite the deus ex machina on this one, he just understands it out of nowhere...

Ancient_God:It's a one thing if he only tells his subordinate what to do (delegated the task to his subordinates), but he also tells them how to do it. And even those from apocalypse military background such as in colonel rank falls to the mc's military strategy of taking over the colonel's shelter and men without a fight, just by using some propaganda. Now, which one is it the "delegated" you mentioned?
Ancient_God
Ancient_GodLv6Ancient_God

It has been a long time since my last comment on this. I forgot some of the things and facts. So let's just see to the points I remember well. 1. Master of modern warfare and tactics : when he saved robert, it is not entirely because of his future tech, even with those techs and his superior gene and his superior sense, they are not trained well (he just got them and I assumed he should not get used to his new body constitution yet since he only did a few battle before) . What would happen if a special ops soldier armed with knives facing off a five year old kid armed with laser gun? Who do you think would win? From the mentality to kill humans, skill, reaction speed, and under preasure judgement, our mc seems to have master them all when he saved robert instead of just relying on his tech and superior body. You can say that he relies on techs in his fight against the CIB agents (when he just blasted them all with the power suit), but when he saved robert? I don't think so. 2. About the fall out shelter. You said that "he just make use of the flaw in the colonel's character"? They just met 2 or 3 times and he already has a good grasp in her character? Don't tell me our mc has also mastered psychological? How could he announced with confidence that the fallout shelter will fall in less than a month? How would he know if the colonel won't tell the truth to the masses and instead move acording to his plan? I say even a person at a magister degree in psychologic won't have a confidence to say what he say just based on manipulating people psychological or take a complete knowledge of the colonel's personality in just 2 or 3 meetings. And remember, he even soon will get his hands on panu islands. He already has planed a take over for an entire country, no matter how small or weak a country is, it is still a country with a complete govermental structure. Now tell me, where does a mechanical engineering graduate has such knowledge to take over a country? And remember, this plan he came up with his own, not by some sugestion from his subordinate like when he took 6th street. 3. About the bussiness tactics and laws, I just get the feeling when he had a grand assembly of stake holders when he took over the new building of a tech company who assaulted him. 4. About politics, you already realised it.

Adicawida:Lets list it, then - master of physics: he's a mechanical engineering student, so it's not impossible for him to master some physics - biologist: where did this came from? I don't see him doing any biology work at all - tech guy: if buying a phone and then throwing it into the phone developer to develop a new OS could be called being a tech guy then sure he is - master of modern warfare and tactics: if you call overwhelming air superiority and ballistic missile tactics, then sure he is. I myself called it technological superiority. And the fallout shelter was made to fall, it's a social experiment where their second leader will be painted as the "demonic ruler who rose to power after the sacrifice of the wise king". He's basically exploiting the flaw on the "demonic ruler"s character. Or maybe you meant the fight on the modern world, where he basically stumbles to use his genetical and technological advantage to get even a small bit of advantage when saving Robert? -business and business law master: he left his business to be taken care of by the CEO and took a hands-off approach, and his understanding of business law is basically as long as you have good product and strong government backing, then you're okay -politics: gotta admit author is pulling quite the deus ex machina on this one, he just understands it out of nowhere...
Ancient_God
Ancient_GodLv6Ancient_God

And for the record, I love this story and I like a smart mc. And the way the author put the scheme is quite good, it makes the mc looks really smart. Not like some other novels where the mc is quite the idiot and the author forced the mc to look like a smart one by making other people in the novel look so much like idiots who can't even solve 1+1 By this alone, I can tell that our author is quite smart because he is able to create a smart and knowledgeable mc. The only drawback is mc's background knowldge. Because sometimes he seems to know everything out of nowhere. He should be a grandson of a military general, his father a great politician, and his mother is a sucsesful company leader, while he himself is a mechanical engineering graduate. From childhood he trained in martial combat and military tactics and warfares by his grandpa, trained in politics by his father, and trained in bussiness by his mom. That would explained why he has all that knowledge instead of knowing them all overnight.

Adicawida
AdicawidaLv12Adicawida

Okay, just answer based on what you remember and I'll try to do the same as well, after all opening up this topic again after 2-3 months is quite unfair to you 1. >he's not accustomed to his new body and senses: at this point in time he's been trained by Sun Jiao, and also been through at least 3 life and death battles, that's enough battle experience to understand his hidden gene and numb his sense over killing people >if he's only relying on superior weapon, yes he'll die, fortunately he got his trusty drone, life detection, heat seeking grenade, and oh don't forget the bracelet that reflects any material object away from him for a period of time. So, no it's not only a laser gun. >and by the way, those soldiers aren't trained to be special ops, they aren't some special force of a country, they're normal conscript infantry who's job was only to guard a building on the backline. At most they're as good as Russian conscript in WW2, for all we know they might not have seen any action at all in combat >on the gun v knife thing, the possibility for the knife wielder to win exists only when they're the one on the initiative, but if it's the other way around, the gun wielder wins everytime, don't let eastern media fool you, if what they're showing you is true with all these melee fighters winning against the gunmans, why'd we still lose the war against britain and their muskets. >then there's the three-way fight against the Russian and Nazi remnants in Ukraine(or Kaine, just so we don't get into international trouble), but he already got the VR chamber with it's optimal training thing, so I can't really count that... the CIB agents that's also a non tactical battle... >what you're mostly listing here is battle skills, while tactics usually involve a battle leadership, which MC only showed on the fallout world... 2. >he shouldn't be able to judge colonel's character flaw from meeting her once: are you kidding me? Did you remember what she opened her bargain with? A gun on her head and if the fallout shelter's system knew she died it will randomly kill of half of the residents to use them as the fuel for the rest of the residents to live. Her flaw is glaringly obvious. She cared more about her duty than her subject. At first MC never thought that this kind of leadership is a contrast from the previous one, that's why he put the biggest opening move he can and leaked the conversation to the residents to break their morale. However, this opening move coupled with the "death of the wise king" was enough to make the resident want to overthrow their "dictator". And the only person who understand what will happen, the academician, only gathered datas and send them to space >the one month thing is just a boast, he's lucky it actually happened within weeks >the thing about Pannu Island: as far as I know he only give general direction and Robert is the one who "wrote the script" as we know it, but I'll be looking forward to seeing what will unfold there, but this is cutting it close to the politic point which I've conceded already 3. That's basically a threat, "your stocks will plummet more if you don't agree with me" it's a ****** enough to understand threat since the company is doomed and the only saving grace is that he bought the shares of the company enough to be the president. If he sold all of his shares right after the meeting out of spite, the company will fall and the shareholders will lose all of the money they invested to the company, a very ****** and straightforward threat...

Ancient_God:It has been a long time since my last comment on this. I forgot some of the things and facts. So let's just see to the points I remember well. 1. Master of modern warfare and tactics : when he saved robert, it is not entirely because of his future tech, even with those techs and his superior gene and his superior sense, they are not trained well (he just got them and I assumed he should not get used to his new body constitution yet since he only did a few battle before) . What would happen if a special ops soldier armed with knives facing off a five year old kid armed with laser gun? Who do you think would win? From the mentality to kill humans, skill, reaction speed, and under preasure judgement, our mc seems to have master them all when he saved robert instead of just relying on his tech and superior body. You can say that he relies on techs in his fight against the CIB agents (when he just blasted them all with the power suit), but when he saved robert? I don't think so. 2. About the fall out shelter. You said that "he just make use of the flaw in the colonel's character"? They just met 2 or 3 times and he already has a good grasp in her character? Don't tell me our mc has also mastered psychological? How could he announced with confidence that the fallout shelter will fall in less than a month? How would he know if the colonel won't tell the truth to the masses and instead move acording to his plan? I say even a person at a magister degree in psychologic won't have a confidence to say what he say just based on manipulating people psychological or take a complete knowledge of the colonel's personality in just 2 or 3 meetings. And remember, he even soon will get his hands on panu islands. He already has planed a take over for an entire country, no matter how small or weak a country is, it is still a country with a complete govermental structure. Now tell me, where does a mechanical engineering graduate has such knowledge to take over a country? And remember, this plan he came up with his own, not by some sugestion from his subordinate like when he took 6th street. 3. About the bussiness tactics and laws, I just get the feeling when he had a grand assembly of stake holders when he took over the new building of a tech company who assaulted him. 4. About politics, you already realised it.
Adicawida
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The censored words are sim.ple

SlimeyX
SlimeyXLv5SlimeyX

Le me just do this reply for the exp.

StargazerWizard
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Exp also

Lv4

Did you not even try to read synopsis and tags? All your points are basically irrelevant to this novels aim

Lv4

This novel is about becoming rich and powerful with a cheat and advanced technology and conquering the world.