the story may be good , but i literally hate every fanfic about one piece which is about Navy or marines because they are just the dogs of the celestial dragons , the mc is gonna be a marine , then he sees those pigs cruelty somewhere , he decides to stand against them and bamn!! he becomes a pirate or criminal
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And I'm tired of One Piece fanfics with a pirate protagonist, I mean, there isn't one in which she's a Marine and tries to change what's inside.
the thing is he can't change anything from within , Sengoku is adamant on following world government and how will he fight all of them alone , it should not necessarily be a pirate one , he can be a king of a kingdom . i recently read one , it's called Pirates world : restoration ,I think it's good
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I mean for me i hate pirates protag (read to much and now becoming stale) or protag that just join luffy crew( since those are just the anime/ manga but theres an extra crewmember ) having a protag in the Marines or god forbid the CP agency to spice some things up
you know i also have read too much of joining Luffy's crew ones but joining world government or Navy just make too much of predictable plot
You mean mc joins the navy then in the future betrays the marines and wg? Literally 90% of all marine novels mc ends up betraying them i dropped those kind of novel
And a pirate ff isnt a predictable plot? I read a lot of pirate ff and the plot tends to be very pedictable especially chinese translated ff
Yes , pirate one is also predictable , that's why i left reading one piece ones all together I only read the ones with kingdom building in one piece
you stop the novel like that? yeah because if MC has a sense of justice unless MC has the power to kill (im) immediately he definitely won't be willing, or if MC's rank is already high , in the end the MC will be ordered to guard the heavenly dragon, that is if the MC has a sense of justice, but I have found evil MCs who don't care about the slaves, and follow the world government as a dog while he can get money, (the marines are the dogs of the world government) that's a fitting metaphor,The marines are closely guarded by 5 powerful elders, if you want to become an admiral you have to have your personality tested by the elders, the garb survives only because it is the motto of the navy, if the garb is removed many will disagree,If an ordinary person went against the will of the world government, he would definitely be eliminated, even if he was talented.,and unless there is an absurd plot it is impossible for an MC who has strong self-esteem and strong justice to survive in the navy, ONE QUESTION, why did the 5 elders choose Shenggoku to be an admiral instead of Zephyr, because Shenggoku is a dog that looks very loyal, yeah even though I know Zephyr won't become an admiral, but that's a fact
I mean garp (garb), English is not my first language🗿
Because its just a pirate novel with extra steps
Also why would they pick Zhephyr over Sengoku lol in the wold of one piece power talks and sengoku is much more powerful than zephyr
