To be honest, The story is bad to say the least, The power system is Trash, the author dosen't know the least bit about how gojo's powers work or how Haki works. I will say that he tried to find a way for it to be balanced with the one piece power system however it wasn't done in a good way at all. The story is mid, Read like 50 chapters and it is repetitive, it's not the worst if it was your first fanfic but if it is then i would say that you should chose an easier character to make as the power base for the MC and less complex world for you to make a fanfic on. Also the dialogue is wack and there is no real personality in the OC. The writing style isn't terrible but it's not the best either. to conclude: It's not the worst thing ever but it's bad and could use a rewrite or a redo. Good concept bad execution. This is all constructive criticism so sorry if it seems harsh, don't take it to heart. keep getting better and you can make something good one day.
Liked by 13 people
LIKE
ZetharQuinn:image
