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BraggskiLv32mth
2024-12-16 05:05

It's a pretty good story but one thing that kind of irks me is that the transmigration aspect is just about forgotten about the first few chapters and is never mentioned again. I understand wishing for characters to move past that, but I feel like this story could've done without the isekai aspect and it wouldn't have even changed anything. Overall, pretty damn good, the grammar is on point, the dialogue is snappy, and the characters are alright. Would've liked better paragraphs pertaining to the description of certain scenes, outfits, and such. It can sometimes feel a little bare.

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