I honestly feel like the backstory was useless but everything else, great. He doesn't do any hitman-esque shit(even against his trainer. We don't even see him try and fail. No technique nothing, he's just a natural. It'd be nice if he gave even a bit of fight. I get that it's a pro hero but it took 40 people to take him down. I get that this body isn't trained or whatever but still...) but it is fun and feels more like talented dude reincarnates in mha and it's really funny. Your character is pretty interesting. I think it has potential. So five stars even if it isn't perfect. It's fun and light hearted so it's refreshing.
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