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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv54mth
2024-12-01 21:25

First off, its decently written but I think author needs to change the backstory of mc as he is no way a hitman(way too nice for that)....Maybe make him some common teen thug or something. That said if u pretend the first chapter doesn't exist and take him as a blank mc then its pretty alright. Also Oc characters kinda make it weird as they feel like they don't belong in mha. Overall has potential but there should be less reliance on Ocs.

My Hero Academia: Limitless

WisteriaNovels
4.3
64 Chs

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VVartz
VVartzLv14

skip the first chapter, got it. cheers. is your name lazy rabbit or crazy rabbit?

4mth
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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv5

Well it depends on how much sleep I get.

VVartz:skip the first chapter, got it. cheers. is your name lazy rabbit or crazy rabbit?
4mth
35
VVartz
VVartzLv14

lol, fair enough

Klazy_Labbit:Well it depends on how much sleep I get.
4mth
10
IP_MAN
IP_MANLv4

Most fanfic writers for some reason always want their mc to be a former killer and be reborn as a handsome man. Even though not being handsome is fine as long as he has a harem.

4mth
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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv5

yeah I feel like some authors try way too hard for what is essentially filler stuff as intro is not going to play any part in the actual story. I thinks fics will be better if they just start of with a small para saying mc got reincarnated or something and u can slowly build his character up from references to his past rather than trying to sum up entire life in a single chap.

IP_MAN:Most fanfic writers for some reason always want their mc to be a former killer and be reborn as a handsome man. Even though not being handsome is fine as long as he has a harem.
4mth
21
TheEternalGod
TheEternalGodLv3

Eternal samsara: wanderer of worlds does that perfectly. He has like 11 lives but they slowly influence and grow his character throughout the story. Reccomended read

Klazy_Labbit:yeah I feel like some authors try way too hard for what is essentially filler stuff as intro is not going to play any part in the actual story. I thinks fics will be better if they just start of with a small para saying mc got reincarnated or something and u can slowly build his character up from references to his past rather than trying to sum up entire life in a single chap.
4mth
7
Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv5

Oh yeah I read that one.Its written by wall who has good world building skills.

TheEternalGod:Eternal samsara: wanderer of worlds does that perfectly. He has like 11 lives but they slowly influence and grow his character throughout the story. Reccomended read
4mth
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Jorah26252
Jorah26252Lv4

I refuse to read anything from that author after what he did with his one piece fic, the author tends to make his mc kill needlessly

TheEternalGod:Eternal samsara: wanderer of worlds does that perfectly. He has like 11 lives but they slowly influence and grow his character throughout the story. Reccomended read
4mth
5
Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv5

that one piece fic was prolly his worst one lmao.

Jorah26252:I refuse to read anything from that author after what he did with his one piece fic, the author tends to make his mc kill needlessly
4mth
2
mow
mowLv4

Nah his 2nd one piece one is

Klazy_Labbit:that one piece fic was prolly his worst one lmao.
3mth
1
raidersking6
raidersking6Lv10

Whats the second one? Doesn't he only have the Hashirama Senju one?

mow:Nah his 2nd one piece one is
3mth
mow
mowLv4

Thats his second one, his first one piece one was the one in skypeia

raidersking6:Whats the second one? Doesn't he only have the Hashirama Senju one?
3mth
Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

Yeah, It's very obvious he doesn't have that backstory.

2mth
Salted_fish_
Salted_fish_Lv13

Klazy_Labbit:Well it depends on how much sleep I get.
2mth
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

1st chapter is a nightmare.

VVartz:skip the first chapter, got it. cheers. is your name lazy rabbit or crazy rabbit?
2mth
Other Reviews
Zbara_1577
Zbara_1577Lv4

did someone say....... Miruko? ........

4mth

Ruzzzy
RuzzzyLv1

The story itself is not bad.. But personally boring for me, there is a lot of slice of life. And I find the MC backstory inappropriate, his character later on doesn't really fit his backstory. I also agree with the review above that the OC characters do not fit into the world; in general, when you read the interaction between the characters, the feeling sometimes is uncomfortable and artificial

4mth
Keyaruga_Tsuki
Keyaruga_TsukiLv4

Girl Bakugo?.....What.?? Dropped..........

3mth
SYED_AFAQ
SYED_AFAQLv4

author is there Yuri or ntr in it hope not also is mc op

4mth
Ulinsus
UlinsusLv1

From the beginning I liked how Gojo Satoru's abilities were interpreted. Even the harem smoothly flowed into the plot. But my mood was spoiled by plot twists that were incomprehensible to me and jumps between joy and tension, which completely knocked out the motivation to read further and follow the updates.

3mth
NanoLOA
NanoLOALv4

Another banger to let marinate, I hope this one doesn’t get dropped like a lot other Gojo esc MHA fics.

4mth
Trashconsumer
TrashconsumerLv2

Meh, its an average crossover of jjk and boku no hero, mc gets to be wallmart gojo just because, then theres the weird inconsistencies that keep appearing out of nowhere with conversations that seem unnecessary, mc is normal, very normal nothing new tbh, like a normal guy even with all his back stories, the kind of personality anyone could imagine using a normal person's day to day life and response. I cant see this fanfic as anything other than another make a wish of the author, nothing new overall

2mth
ProdigiousKriatori
ProdigiousKriatoriLv3

The story is well written and has a nice flow to it that makes it a nice read. The only issue with this novel is the inconsistency with the MCs character it’s like the author forgot he was a reincarnated hitman. The inconsistencies aren’t just with the MCs character it’s also the power scaling. Overall if you read have low expectations and don’t second guess anything that is if you want to actually enjoy the story.

3mth
Darksil
DarksilLv4

Miruko waifu №1

4mth
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