did someone say....... Miruko? ........

First off, its decently written but I think author needs to change the backstory of mc as he is no way a hitman(way too nice for that)....Maybe make him some common teen thug or something. That said if u pretend the first chapter doesn't exist and take him as a blank mc then its pretty alright. Also Oc characters kinda make it weird as they feel like they don't belong in mha. Overall has potential but there should be less reliance on Ocs.

The story itself is not bad.. But personally boring for me, there is a lot of slice of life. And I find the MC backstory inappropriate, his character later on doesn't really fit his backstory. I also agree with the review above that the OC characters do not fit into the world; in general, when you read the interaction between the characters, the feeling sometimes is uncomfortable and artificial

author is there Yuri or ntr in it hope not also is mc op

Another banger to let marinate, I hope this one doesn’t get dropped like a lot other Gojo esc MHA fics.

Reveal spoiler

Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.

Overall good read, the grammar isn’t the worse I’m there aren’t many mistakes. The concept is cool even though there are multiple fics where mc has gojo powers it still has it’s uniqueness. Added characters are cool and make the story funny(especially my boy Todo), romance so far is coming along nicely and I don’t have any major problems with it. One thing that’s worth pointing out is the inconsistency with mc power, he’s presented as a reborn assassin and then he doesn’t display any characteristics that you would expect from one. The author sometimes messes the scaling but he tries and improves it so I don’t realy have the problem. I only have one question, cause this reminds me of another fic that was removed from the app, it was about afo son(though he wasn’t presented as him there were multiple clues), he got power that allowed him to absorbe and redirect kinetic energy(I noticed similar thing in chapter when they did the first hero classes and author wrote that mc barrier absorbed energy), plus in the fic there were also au characters, todo was also presented as the mc friend, and kaori was also there and i think she was spy of afo(though one again it wasn’t said, just many clues). I can’t realy check it’s name but the author was AkiraTensei and it had nejjire on the cover. I’ll be glad if I got an answer just to satisfy my curiosity, because I don’t realy care If it was or wasn’t inspired by that fic since it’s already gone.

Honestly I don't even know what to say about this one. It's PHENOMENAL. Peak. It's just an absolute peak. It has nice characters and fights. Beautiful emotions. It has Todo. I think this is enough. Just go for it.