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Calm down man, he's not Zoro. He's a cowardly MC named Zoro.
So, he was pretending to be a shy Gasper to avoid being found out. But then he suddenly flirts with Koneko in front of everyone. What's really going on? Is the author stupid?
Hopefully, the story doesn't rush into adulthood too quickly. I'd like to see more of the entertainment industry for child actors.
Okay Yuji is starting to OOC
If you're really aiming to write a realistic story, you might have trouble moving the story along quickly. The pace will be slow because it requires detailed descriptions to avoid plot holes.
I think this is clearly not Kuro's character. This is clearly your mind, which wants to attack Kaya. Don't blame Kuro.
Yes, Buggy is Yuji's natural counter, just like Luffy is Enel's. But the problem is that Yuji can cut souls.
in front of godsuya everyone is a side character
So is she fully female now?
Otamega is more suitable for King Keima