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Uchiha night star?? I wonder who gave this strange name??

The story is quite good but OY OY OY author. I read that you only want to have 3 women. I thought mc is quite strong with great stamina. But he can only satisfy 3 women. It seems like mc is not that strong. At least if you want 3, 2 of them are ghislaine and elinalise because they are quite capable. That is if mc is strong enough. If her stamina is weak I'm sure mc won't choose them.... RIGHT???

The story is quite good but OY OY OY author. I read that you only want to have 3 women. I thought mc is quite strong with great stamina. But he can only satisfy 3 women. It seems like mc is not that strong. At least if you want 3, 2 of them are ghislaine and elinalise because they are quite capable. That is if mc is strong enough. If her stamina is weak I'm sure mc won't choose them.... RIGHT???

Why did Makarov appear?? Fairy Tail is not a shelter for abandoned children .

Hachiman brought a bicycle. When he was going to save Yui's dog. He got off and ran. So it can be said that at that time Hachiman brought a bicycle. If it was Aki. There's no way Eriri looked fine when she met Utaha? Because Aki himself is Eriri's childhood friend and the person she likes.

If Hachiman dies, Yukino and Yui's guilt will be very heavy

Ichin[img=thinking].. sorry, this is a name that is often used in which country??

18 years old??? What grade is he in. Kuoh high school accepted male students 1 year before Canon. So male students are only in the 2nd and 1st grade. Issei's age is 17 when he was in the 2nd grade. I don't know why many dxd fanfic writers always force the mc to enter the 3rd grade even though there are no male students in the 3rd grade because at that time Kuoh High school was still a female school

After reading 13 chapters. I don't like the development of the story that doesn't change much. Especially the USJ part where the MC should ask for help from people before it happens or record it so he becomes famous. The plot forces the story to be on the same path so it feels strange. But the added value of this story is the dialogue. There are many good fanfic stories in a more developed storyline but their dialogues are very bad and seem forced. But in this fanfic the dialogue is quite good and I like it.

Honestly, to begin with, this story is bad and super cliche. But I'll try to continue it.