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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv142mth
2024-11-13 09:40

5/5 Mostly because Bob is a bum. See first review for reference. he wanted a side quester MC. what a loser. anyways, the story so far is decent. a few spelling/grammar issues but for the most part it's fine. I like the MC so far and this time period isn't usually focused on either. With so many fanfics written, everything is partially generic or cliche but how you navigate through it all is a major factor in a quality fanfic. so far this story hasn't strayed from that blueprint. if it does start to fall off, since its early, ill revise my rating but until then keep it up.

Harry Potter : Reincarnated as The Greatest Wizard

SwordmanCarryNuke
4.4
160 Chs

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

First big mistake. throwing an orphan in slytherin. probably one of the dumbest and overused cliches out there. Just read this after writing the review. hopefully it doesn't ruin the story but it does hurt it.

2mth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

But the novel is boring, with a boring and sexless protagonist. If someone wins the lottery, they wouldn't risk their life to fight a psychopath, unless they have a mental problem. What would you do if you won a lottery of 100 million dollars? Fight with knives with a psychotic war veteran or eat delicious meals on a luxury yacht, what would you do? 🤔 The protagonist has a second chance in his life. But, instead of improving his life, the protagonist decides to be a stupid man with a hero complex. It's not bad to be a hero, what's bad is being stupid and wanting to be a hero because it's "cool", synonymous with mental retardation.

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A_Sleepless_dream
A_Sleepless_dreamLv14

It gets wrose…. So many plot holes…. Mc is a dog….

Bob_Uchiha_XD:But the novel is boring, with a boring and sexless protagonist. If someone wins the lottery, they wouldn't risk their life to fight a psychopath, unless they have a mental problem. What would you do if you won a lottery of 100 million dollars? Fight with knives with a psychotic war veteran or eat delicious meals on a luxury yacht, what would you do? 🤔 The protagonist has a second chance in his life. But, instead of improving his life, the protagonist decides to be a stupid man with a hero complex. It's not bad to be a hero, what's bad is being stupid and wanting to be a hero because it's "cool", synonymous with mental retardation.
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

🤣

A_Sleepless_dream:It gets wrose…. So many plot holes…. Mc is a dog….
2mth
Ciel_Best_Waifu
Ciel_Best_WaifuLv13

Lol so true

Bob_Uchiha_XD:But the novel is boring, with a boring and sexless protagonist. If someone wins the lottery, they wouldn't risk their life to fight a psychopath, unless they have a mental problem. What would you do if you won a lottery of 100 million dollars? Fight with knives with a psychotic war veteran or eat delicious meals on a luxury yacht, what would you do? 🤔 The protagonist has a second chance in his life. But, instead of improving his life, the protagonist decides to be a stupid man with a hero complex. It's not bad to be a hero, what's bad is being stupid and wanting to be a hero because it's "cool", synonymous with mental retardation.
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SwordmanCarryNuke
SwordmanCarryNukeAuthor

Reveal spoiler

2mth

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Why? Why fight Voldemort? Why make the protagonist a fool with a stupid hero complex? Personally, I think it is necessary for the protagonist to risk his life fighting Voldemort in vain, except for a self-esteem problem that drives him to want to be the center of attention.

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Emu_Lator
Emu_LatorLv1

Stopped reading at ch 98. An mc with no knowledge of the franchise just doesnt excite me or interest me. Kind of loses the point of an other worlder/reincarnator if he has no knowledge or have so little of it that he cant utilize it at all

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A_Sleepless_dream
A_Sleepless_dreamLv14

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Adriana7885
Adriana7885Lv12

If your expecting a smart mc then this ain’t it. I love the writing but it’s pretty cringe in the stuff he says and his actions portray him as another Naruto and somehow all the other characters immediately after meeting him already consider him as family while they’re in war and he’s a slytherin? It just seemed unrealistic. I had to drop since he didn’t save some people

2mth
magapi
magapiLv5

disappointing, nothing change with his involvement.....

1mth
Ehor_Kryvenko
Ehor_KryvenkoLv1

I don’t quite understand what the point is in showing off your abilities so much and inventing spells for a common attack (echo and infrasonic strike), he is already an adult and should understand the presence of such hidden cards, and he gives it to others without receiving any benefit except that in the future against they will use his own spell on him 🤦

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Basthian_Licanqueo
Basthian_LicanqueoLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Nico_Pence_0040
Nico_Pence_0040Lv14

one of the best ffs I've read on here, granted most of the storys on here suck with mc who's a psychopath. who kills off all the main characters and somehow gets all the girls. I have to read with my brain turned off and most of these virgins say they like that kind of ff, but hey good story hope u keep it going and don't listen to the idiots.💯💯💯

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