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SwordmanCarryNukeAuthor2mth
2024-11-29 17:09

I see many ask and complain how it follow similar plot with the movie, i will not spoil more, but it just look like that as mc were still too young he will still change everything in the future, with magic the potential is endless

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A_Sleepless_dream
A_Sleepless_dreamLv14

That isn’t what makes people complain… but if that’s what ur getting… sure… whatever floats ur boat…. This is a story abt the mc…. Thats all we care abt…. Harry can and his mother can be raped and tourtured…. We don’t care….. Mc is forced to act stupid and is forced to follow along…. And is doing things completely out of character… and is acting like a dog for people…. Yes there are people frustrated with cannon plot and how it seems like it’s the holy grail….. The issue is how Mc is being forced to do stuff he never would and isn’t even smart in any other way…. Mc is also homeless…. U would think mc would want his home to be protected and everything else cool ideas for future plots but yeah that hasn’t happened yet… hope it does but whatever still hope for something cool ig… just so many plot holes with how mc acts….

A_Sleepless_dream
A_Sleepless_dreamLv14

Yeah no besides the main issue of mc not being mc then yeah good story and novel but yeah too many plot holes

Faiz_Syazwan_6303
Faiz_Syazwan_6303Lv12

I feel like the stories are doing great actually! I found your novel at scribblehub at first and figures here must be where you post normally. Keep going mate!

dertyp2021
dertyp2021Lv3

I can just say, don't let it get you down. This fanfic is a very nice work and there will always be people disagreeing just because they love conflict. You get two thumbs up from me

Bill_Smith_2424
Bill_Smith_2424Lv3

Hero complex and no love interest

Tiktark
TiktarkLv14

him simply being there causes a butterfly effect, how much the effect is depends on the mc

M_Static
M_StaticLv4

well i definitely read this in machine translation somewhere.

Abinav_KR
Abinav_KRLv4

is this harem ?

Boxer_VivekLv4

any idea where that was? I'd like to take a look as well.

M_Static:well i definitely read this in machine translation somewhere.
Vamsi_TonyLv3

This is the original Chinese novel name : 从霍格沃兹开始掌控雷电

Boxer_Vivek:any idea where that was? I'd like to take a look as well.
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