im enjoying the book quite a bit but mostly cuz im bored, this book though is kinda boring in some aspects and ridiculous at others. Best part hes fing the whole tang san plot armor somewhat, the bad part hes basically only focused on girls. The power scaling is just wierd, he has as much mental reserves as a lvl 99 limit douluo and can only use perfect susanoo for 3 seconds? (around chapter 400) It just doesnt make sense to me, in naruto standards he is easily a kage lvl with everything he has so hows that possible, madara was capable of having it for a day or 2 while in combat with hashirama and thats while remote piloting, not from inside. Then theres his energy reserves, for his lvl he acts like he cant do much, at times he gets pretty wiped out from only using one technique, then he gains a few lvls and can use that same technique like hes drinking water. IDK, maybe im looking into it to much, ill enjoy what i can but i still dont like how hes so focused on girls when he knows theres a war coming, he should b focusing on getting stronger not who next to bang.
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LIKEhonestly it is a fantasy and a fanfic, so...you might not find good ones that will be fully logical, and one thing i noticed as an avid fanfic enjoyer, most fanfic that try to focus on the details you mentioned ended up becoming boring as heck, anyway thanks for the good constructive criticism.