Honestly I love this FF. I like the concept, I like the MC, I like how the characters are depicted, and I like the fact that the romance is well paced. Nothing is too fast nor too slow combined with the really fast updates it gives us a perfect combination when you progress in the story regularly and not like some other stories where it's too slow paced and you have only 1 chapter per week. The two downsides that I see are: - Some errors sometimes, like Ah Yin or Xiao Yu who are 100,000 years soul beasts but author (or translator I didn't look) write that they are 10,000 years soul beats. - The use of the diary, at start it was regularly used and present in every chapter, later MC instead do a session from time to time, sometimes with months between two sessions, while for use it's like 2-3 chapters I still think it's dumb to discard potential rewards just because MC didn't write just 1 or 2 lines in his diary.
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there were errors in 10000 years that should be 100,000 years like you mentioned, i fixed whenever it came up, also it is quite tedious to fix them all, i will keep fixing them whenever anyone notices, about the diary the mc got lazy and even i felt diary rewards were not properly distributed.
Then thank you for your work, honestly, these errors aren't grave enough to affect the quality of this ff, so there is no problem. And I understand for the diary; if the rewards had kept coming, MC would have been way too strong. I'm just complaining because I love reading the moments when he writes, and the female protagonists react to it, so in my book, the more there is, the better.
that's why i love diary novels and broadcast novls
