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ArezEoz
ArezEozLv56mth
2024-11-01 01:25

If you like it you will probably change your mind at ch.56. The female characters who can read the diary have no freedom, and the system becomes more and more of a person who's only goal is to give the carrot and the stick to the female characters forcing them on the road to become the MCs harem. In this chapter the system literally tells (female characters) them that they are Not allowed to appear where the don't in the plot, at the risk of death.

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Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

also the system never forced them to be on the harem, except Ah Yin.

Josh9
Josh9Lv3

Except for the fact that they all get op buffs and items for having sex with him, and the more they get mentioned they get better rewards. Basically mind control, plus what happened to ah yin was disgusting. I hope you keep translating because you did a great job, however this story wasn't that great, manipulative/borderline mind control system, plus it talked, talking systems suck.

Shadow_D_X:also the system never forced them to be on the harem, except Ah Yin.
Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

stop being so salty it is a fiction man, nothing is disgusting here what's wrong with mind control powers, what's wrong with wanting to get everything? talking system is gold af, maybe you like pure love stuffs and japanese beta mc, sure i like that too, also is a gold story, like some people think re-zero is the best but i think it is absolute garbage with an imponent ntr villain like how did the writer even come up with this although since he made a weak mc who keeps dying and is popular still somehow, but if people enjoy it who am i to complain.... Conclusion-not everyone will like everything, this is a unique story, you won't find anything similar my second favorite talking system. I will keep translating because i want people to read decent translations quickly, most people are too damn slow.

Josh9:Except for the fact that they all get op buffs and items for having sex with him, and the more they get mentioned they get better rewards. Basically mind control, plus what happened to ah yin was disgusting. I hope you keep translating because you did a great job, however this story wasn't that great, manipulative/borderline mind control system, plus it talked, talking systems suck.
Josh9
Josh9Lv3

You're fighting ghosts there, I'm not salty I'm stating facts. I donno why you got all deffensive over it. I hope it made you feel better though.

Shadow_D_X:stop being so salty it is a fiction man, nothing is disgusting here what's wrong with mind control powers, what's wrong with wanting to get everything? talking system is gold af, maybe you like pure love stuffs and japanese beta mc, sure i like that too, also is a gold story, like some people think re-zero is the best but i think it is absolute garbage with an imponent ntr villain like how did the writer even come up with this although since he made a weak mc who keeps dying and is popular still somehow, but if people enjoy it who am i to complain.... Conclusion-not everyone will like everything, this is a unique story, you won't find anything similar my second favorite talking system. I will keep translating because i want people to read decent translations quickly, most people are too damn slow.
Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

um...i was just stating facts lol

Josh9:You're fighting ghosts there, I'm not salty I'm stating facts. I donno why you got all deffensive over it. I hope it made you feel better though.
Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

i am not blaming you for not liking this series, people's taste is different for example no matter how good a yaoi or yuri series is i would find it disgusting while some love or even drool at it, i just said my perspective like you did that's all and no one is fighting you man.

Josh9:You're fighting ghosts there, I'm not salty I'm stating facts. I donno why you got all deffensive over it. I hope it made you feel better though.
Josh9
Josh9Lv3

Na talking systems are dumb, that's an opinion, so is mind control powers are cool or whatever you said, it's all opinions.

Shadow_D_X:um...i was just stating facts lol
Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

exactly everything is relative, like what i find something to be wonderful you didn't like it, so only absolute truth is factual, "like earth is round", that is a fact.

Josh9:Na talking systems are dumb, that's an opinion, so is mind control powers are cool or whatever you said, it's all opinions.
Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

correction..she wasn't forced to have s**...she was forced to be his soul spirit..if you don't agree...by your logic...the soul spirit of Huo Yuhao(male) is forced to have s** with him too? and it is not like the system is forcing them to have s**, but forcing the heroines not to be in the way of mc, i read some fanfics where bibi dong and liu erlong went to extreme length to help tras* xiaogong, also let's say someone pays a ho*ker to have s**, are they forcing her? the system gives an incentive, the fmc's can chose whatever they want, that's why i sad your idea is totally incorrect.

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Josh9
Josh9Lv3

You didn't read properly, no one said Ah Yin was forced to have sex with him, again you're fighting ghosts my man. Re read what I wrote, she was forced to be his soul spirit, even then she still had a choice (even if it was do this or die). I said she was fucked over, which unless you're a heartless bastard is a complete fact.

Shadow_D_X:correction..she wasn't forced to have s**...she was forced to be his soul spirit..if you don't agree...by your logic...the soul spirit of Huo Yuhao(male) is forced to have s** with him too? and it is not like the system is forcing them to have s**, but forcing the heroines not to be in the way of mc, i read some fanfics where bibi dong and liu erlong went to extreme length to help tras* xiaogong, also let's say someone pays a ho*ker to have s**, are they forcing her? the system gives an incentive, the fmc's can chose whatever they want, that's why i sad your idea is totally incorrect.
fiction_writer
fiction_writerLv2

Technically, you did mention female characters are forced to have sex with mc because of system.

Josh9:You didn't read properly, no one said Ah Yin was forced to have sex with him, again you're fighting ghosts my man. Re read what I wrote, she was forced to be his soul spirit, even then she still had a choice (even if it was do this or die). I said she was fucked over, which unless you're a heartless bastard is a complete fact.
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