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CouchPotatoDandy
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2024-11-14 17:01

At first I was really excited to find another good fanfic. The translation was good and with 5 chapters released daily I was thrilled! Unfortunately the author messed up right on the second chapter. Such a shame... I really liked the system concept and the rewards it gave the MC too. The MC got a journal where he can write his thoughts and based on the words count he writes he receive a rewards each day. But why did the author need to make it weird and let all the female leads see his journal content??? Right off the bat the MC write he is a reincarnator and continues to give details on the world he is now, how it was a novel in his previous world and its plot - letting all the female lead know their future in a how much of a pervert the MC is and his his deepest secrets... Such a shame!! Except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability which I give five stars, everything else receive only one star.

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Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

Honestly deciding on such a harsh review on such a few chapter is totally unwise, also if you don't plan to read till the end you can just ignore it, also not everyone will like everything, for example i personally hate 'Oshi no ko' series because i dislike the main cast, but everyone likes them, but i i totally ignore the hype and i don't like dark and idol animes.

Ratman27
Ratman27Lv2

Soul Land fics that you recomend?

Shadow_D_X: Honestly deciding on such a harsh review on such a few chapter is totally unwise, also if you don't plan to read till the end you can just ignore it, also not everyone will like everything, for example i personally hate 'Oshi no ko' series because i dislike the main cast, but everyone likes them, but i i totally ignore the hype and i don't like dark and idol animes.
Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

If you want soul land fics recommendations there are a lot, the one that is one of my favourite was Douluo double comparison this Yuhao is too cruel

Ratman27:Soul Land fics that you recomend?
Drurlulu
DrurluluLv13

You don't know diary novels do you? This is a common cliche that many authors uses, diary novels will usually have only females be the one to see it. Live Broadcasts and Memory Reveal are quite similar, since it targets mostly women for the harem lol

TL_LitnChnotski
TL_LitnChnotskiLv4

Any recs bro? i love these, I don't care which fandom Just need more diary novels from any site.

Drurlulu:You don't know diary novels do you? This is a common cliche that many authors uses, diary novels will usually have only females be the one to see it. Live Broadcasts and Memory Reveal are quite similar, since it targets mostly women for the harem lol
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