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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv53mth
2024-11-14 17:01

At first I was really excited to find another good fanfic. The translation was good and with 5 chapters released daily I was thrilled! Unfortunately the author messed up right on the second chapter. Such a shame... I really liked the system concept and the rewards it gave the MC too. The MC got a journal where he can write his thoughts and based on the words count he writes he receive a rewards each day. But why did the author need to make it weird and let all the female leads see his journal content??? Right off the bat the MC write he is a reincarnator and continues to give details on the world he is now, how it was a novel in his previous world and its plot - letting all the female lead know their future in a how much of a pervert the MC is and his his deepest secrets... Such a shame!! Except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability which I give five stars, everything else receive only one star.

Douluo : People are writing diaries in Douluo (completed)

Shadow_D_X
4.6
657 Chs

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Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

Honestly deciding on such a harsh review on such a few chapter is totally unwise, also if you don't plan to read till the end you can just ignore it, also not everyone will like everything, for example i personally hate 'Oshi no ko' series because i dislike the main cast, but everyone likes them, but i i totally ignore the hype and i don't like dark and idol animes.

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Ratman27
Ratman27Lv2

Soul Land fics that you recomend?

Shadow_D_X: Honestly deciding on such a harsh review on such a few chapter is totally unwise, also if you don't plan to read till the end you can just ignore it, also not everyone will like everything, for example i personally hate 'Oshi no ko' series because i dislike the main cast, but everyone likes them, but i i totally ignore the hype and i don't like dark and idol animes.
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Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

If you want soul land fics recommendations there are a lot, the one that is one of my favourite was Douluo double comparison this Yuhao is too cruel

Ratman27:Soul Land fics that you recomend?
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Drurlulu
DrurluluLv13

You don't know diary novels do you? This is a common cliche that many authors uses, diary novels will usually have only females be the one to see it. Live Broadcasts and Memory Reveal are quite similar, since it targets mostly women for the harem lol

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TL_LitnChnotski
TL_LitnChnotskiLv4

Any recs bro? i love these, I don't care which fandom Just need more diary novels from any site.

Drurlulu:You don't know diary novels do you? This is a common cliche that many authors uses, diary novels will usually have only females be the one to see it. Live Broadcasts and Memory Reveal are quite similar, since it targets mostly women for the harem lol
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Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

If you want to read advanced chapters, go to my patreon, patreon(.)co(m)/Shadow_D_X, just ignore the brackets, i will be done translating this series by this month in patreon. 10 chapter/day

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Shadow_D_X
Shadow_D_XAuthor

If you want to bad review for illogical reasons...just don't...read the notes before starting and leave if you are so mentally challenged that simple things trigger you..I sincerely hope you find something better to read...I honestly started this so that people don't have to put up with mtl...and just enjoy reading, also i myself this read novel twice from beginning to end, that's why i give out 5 chapters/day

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Bierbart
BierbartLv14

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Longshan
LongshanLv4

I'm not surprised why the translator translated this novel. It's very enjoyable to read. MC solved the ridiculous and unreasonable plot about Tang San by bullying her and writing in a diary, making almost all the female leads know the terrible things that happened to them in the original story. I really like the plot of this story. The humor is not bad. There are scenes of MC showing love for girls all the time. So I recommend everyone to try reading it. Then you will think about how bad the original plot of Douluo Dalu is

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ArezEoz
ArezEozLv5

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MrSfiry
MrSfiryLv3

I strongly recommend the novel, even though I'm abandoning it here (chap 67) because the system wasn't to my taste, but in all aspects it's a good story. Maybe I'll come back in the future. Good job translator!

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Dautsuro
DautsuroLv3

Honestly I love this FF. I like the concept, I like the MC, I like how the characters are depicted, and I like the fact that the romance is well paced. Nothing is too fast nor too slow combined with the really fast updates it gives us a perfect combination when you progress in the story regularly and not like some other stories where it's too slow paced and you have only 1 chapter per week. The two downsides that I see are: - Some errors sometimes, like Ah Yin or Xiao Yu who are 100,000 years soul beasts but author (or translator I didn't look) write that they are 10,000 years soul beats. - The use of the diary, at start it was regularly used and present in every chapter, later MC instead do a session from time to time, sometimes with months between two sessions, while for use it's like 2-3 chapters I still think it's dumb to discard potential rewards just because MC didn't write just 1 or 2 lines in his diary.

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darknightofAnime
darknightofAnimeLv14

It's such a good story as well as the quality is high. I am so happy to find this story keep it up author!!!!!!!

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Felhavon
FelhavonLv4

I went into this expecting somewhat translation level but this actually looking great as of chapter 100. The system seems to be working towards an excellent life for MC and not randomly screwing him over which is nice to see.

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AbysmalNights
AbysmalNightsLv14

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