Thanks for reading and the review

is this harem?

It says possibly harem. Could you please clarify if it is or not? Also, are there any explicit scenes?

Yes there is harem and I am unsure about the explicit scene

lets gooo

brother as a representative of culture I request you to add some culture in the novel. kindly appreciated

so if you sure it's a harem then you should harem tag because it definitely gonna help increase your viewer, and also about those lemon chapters... you better practice author because I want those lemon chapters(jk just write what you feel best but sometimes trying new thing might be good)

Let’s go harem!!

:Briishcat:

how many members are you planning on adding author?

Whats the discord?

Where’s your discord link

yo author where can i get the discord link

What is even the point of this novel? The title heroine who caused all the mess in the beginning, joins the "Protagonist's" harem. The protagonist and our actual MC are very friendly to each other, while the MC actually has one or two side characters who join his harem. Wtf is this stupid story. Just because you want to make a story which is not a cliche, you don't make unnecessary stupid plot points which just don't align with each other. Idgaf about that Edric, if he isn't opposing our MC then there's no need for him to share so much screen time with our MC, especially when it looks like Edric is getting all the good things while our actual MC is getting scraps. Also one thing I really want to suggest to you all authors is that cliched stories are not inherently bad, it's the author who ducks up cliched stories. The best example for my point is Cultivation Online. Even though the story is very cliched, it's done in a very good manner, so much so that it keeps us, as readers interested and invested. Also the MC, Yuan is an extremely perfect MC, he has a decent and moral character. He will help those who are in need, to a reasonable extent, will crush his enemies and isn't a hypocrite. I absolutely despise those MC, who won't help anybody when they have the power to do so, saying that why should I help them, I am just a villain/neutral, but then will beg and expect from others, to help them when they are powerless. In short I hate hypocrite MC's and this includes those who don't accept their hypocrisy along with those who shamelessly accept that they are hypocrites and are proud about it.

well said

Does Celestria get in a relationship with Edith? ( I forgot his name)

No, from what I have read Celestria doesn't join Edric's harem. Instead she joins our MC , Ceaser's( Alex) harem.

then isn't it all good? Thanks

yeah at least this is better, but still all the rest of my criticisms are still valid. To me Ethan is getting unnecessary screen time, he's not needed. I hate the Naruto Sasuke plot styles.

Lemons?