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streiz
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2024-12-18 23:16

I absolutely love the story 10 out of 10, I would highly recommend it. However, there's one thing I don't like, and that's Celestria. I find her weird, childish, and somewhat manipulative (manipulating the MC or acting pitiful in some degree.) At first, I thought the MC would distance himself from her because of what she did to her original childhood friend. I find it disgusting that she abandoned someone she had known for a long time for someone she just met and thought she loved. Then, when the MC arrived and proved himself, she started chasing him, which felt like a typical, overused trope in Chinese romance stories, common and boring in my opinion. Spoiler alert! Celestria even begged the MC to have a baby despite them being underage, which is a serious issue. On top of that, she lied to her family about being in a relationship with the MC when they weren't. That is very delulu of her and unhealthy to me. If the author decides to include Celestria in the harem (which I suspect the author will), I would strongly prefer Sarah as the main wife. She was there first, even before the MC transmigrated into this world, which makes it justifiable that she should hold that position. Sarah sacrificed so much just to be with the MC again, unlike Celestria. (This is just my opinion as a reader of this story. No hate especially to the author. I'm just expressing what I feel to the characters because I really like the story, and I hope that it could help the author in some degree.)

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Thank you for the review

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