Thanks for the review. And you’re right, it’s my first time writing any sort of ff, so I’m still working on how to properly do the character justice. I’m planning on expanding on the ninja side of things when Haku starts focusing on Haki training more. I welcome advice on how to do that more naturally, though, so don’t hold back if you got some🙌🏻 Ps: Writing the next chapter rn, so you won’t have to wait too long👌🏻

Make him more acrobatic for example instead of fighting face-to-face with punches and kicks you can make him the type jumping around flip above the enemy and stab him with a knife to the eyes or stabbing them in the back or shooting a shower of needles to the face also you can make him fight with style of Tai Chi redirecting the force of the enemy back to himself if he gone to fight in close combat Plus a jab here and there with the weapons cause you have to remember he isn’t a warrior he doesn’t have to fight with honour he is an ninja make him the most efficient and most deadly no matter what is the circumstance because they have been trained to be the most efficient killers also you can watch Naruto again and see his fighting style when he fights Naruto and his gang on the bridge. now I want to give you some idea. I have about fighting style . 1- he can make snow clone of himself instead of Shadow clone that he had the Naruto world .2- make him make a very small ice razor so when the enemy breathe it they will die from the ice razor that will destroyed their body from the inside.3- a bunch of ice spike under the snow so the enemy step on it .4- you can also make him create a snow bomb it can either create missed to cover the protagonist and his crew for retreat or fighting the second you can make the bomb explode with hundred needles that will stab the enemy around the area or/freeze everyone around the area and also you can make the razor bone which is a thin mist very sharp Ice crystals that the enemy can breathing in.5-you can also make him make simple items for example spring under his shoes or a string of thin ice they can cut anything or create a trap with it and don’t limit yourself because his fruit name is snow snow fruit Cause at the end of the day, ice is a highly condensed snow. 6- since he has absolute control of snow, he can also make him create landmine from snap that will shoots spike or something like that. 7- he can also merge his fruit with Rokushiki for example Shigan, instead stabbing other people his finger he can do the same motion but release a snow bullet And also he can make an ice skater to move faster and I advise you to make him learn all Rokushiki style plus the Seimei Kikan .this is all I can give you with my brain juice.

Holy shit, bless you man🙌🏻

romance??

For sure, there will be romance. I’m attempting to cook here, ain’t no way am I leaving out the spice😮‍💨👌🏻

I haven't read it but please don't make it a harem. There are like too many harem one piece fanfiction already 🙏😭

I feel you, and I see you, man. Imma see if I can add some drama into the mix, but for sure I’m keeping it monogamous.

Thank you my man 🙂

That’s more like a ninja👍