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4/5/5/4/5 It's good, a touch of amateurishness in the writing bleeds through every now and again, but it's only endearing since it puts into perspective the amount of effort and carefulness it would take from a new author to make the rest of the story seem natural and polished. Some writing decisions offhand don't make sense but work fine in the flow of the story, and sometimes the comedy doesn't really hit for me but all-in-all that part is fine. I REALLY love the concept of an animal companion and I think the idea is executed wonderfully, I like the MC though I think he's a bit too much of a Gary Stu (not particularly a fan of when fanfic protags overshadow the Straw Hats), protags combat style and powers are unique and refreshing to read. The Slice-of-Life moments truly feel like they'd be scenes straight out of One Piece, the character interactions are quite well-written. I hope he splits off from the Straw Hats like he's intending to so this fic doesn't fall to the wayside like all the other One Piece story's that act like retellings of the canon plot. Good fic. 👍🏻

I like it, but I don't like how you added romance right on the get go. It was so rushed and out of character for both Nojiko and Haku.

I'm still only on the 3rd chapter and I'm hooked to this story. Like damn this is so good i just hope you don't drop it because every fanfiction that I like get's dropped 🥲

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it's good, the characters feel 3D, there's plot changes but it mostly focuses on the mc's journey instead of how he affects luffy's. The mc also has a clear character. this story has lots of potential👍

The story so far has been phenomenal but a little rushed when it comes to catching to to og timeline and romance and the straw hats act out of character