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KratossonofzeuzLv133mth
2024-11-26 04:26

The story isn’t bad it was quite good in the beginning but the story got stale or boring because everything was a community vote i dont have a problem with 1 vote if the writer was having a hard time with something but this author used it a bit too much for my taste the story was getting predictable because everything was voted on in the previous chapters Example the story was going in the direction that he was going to have multiple love interest but in but the community voted against it while i dont have a problem with that my problem is that the author steers the story in that direction just to have a vote on whether should i do this or that and then he does the same thing again all that build up just to just walks everything back its like a multiple choice simulator but the choice are controlled by twitch chat this is just one example as I dont Want to make this spoiler heavy Note : i dont mind votes but i feel like its a cheap way to try to please everyone i just want the writer to write his kind story i dont want a story where its just bland

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