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R0BLv26mth
2024-09-01 19:46

This is really good. Mc is a traveller with a system. His system makes him interact with one piece characters to get rewards. In a way he is like Hawkeye - traveling alone and drinking alcohol (sake).

One Piece: Starting by Refusing Shanks

Gered
4.1
367 Chs

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R0BLv2

Ok, the story progressed and I started to hate mc - he doesn't have dreams, goals or even reason to lift a finger. If he didn't have a system he would probably just sit and starve to death. That's his whole personality - he is practically nothing, nada, null, nil, nought etc.

5mth
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AnimeluvmajicsLv14

Yeah and then with even more recent developments he recruited enel and kaku. Didn’t really enjoy it after he stopped being a lone traveller

5mth
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Feel free to ask me anything, and I'll do my best to answer with what I know about this book. If you notice anything lacking in the quality of the novel, please let me know. I've tried to translate as free of Chinese elements as possible and have changed the Chinese names to fit One Piece characters. I'm always looking to improve, so if you spot any issues with the translation, I'd appreciate your feedback to help me enhance my skills. For this whole week, you'll receive chapters every two hours. I hope you'll support me so I can continue releasing two chapters every two hours next week as well.

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Knight_NoctisLv4

From story to plot , everything is quite well written . But everything good with the story gets pretty much forgotten with the mc. He's not even a generic one. He's just a robot with no dreams or ambitions. His interactions are incredibly bland. And the system just slaves him around . That's another negative point of the story.

6mth
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RedSaintLv11

well to be honest i found it really monotonous the mc only cares about alcohol and the sign-in also feel like he has no personality whatsoever and every character he meets tries to recruit him. besides those it is good if you don't have any other fanfic to read.

5mth
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DecayedTreeLv3

mc is like a depressed overpowerd teenager, and everyone around him acts as a conserned mom trying and failing to break him out of his depression. anyways good story, I hope it continues

5mth
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DocAnubisLv14

The translator is doing a good job at making the story more appetizing but it's soooo boring I have read a lot of Chinese fanfics but this one take the cake for the most monotone,boring,repeating story ever.whenever he goes to a new location all the npcs have the same dialog and reactions.

5mth
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manolohardLv1

O MC é praticamente um robô sem personalidade nenhuma e escravo do sistema,tudo se resume a ele viajando para fazer login e beber sem nenhum propósito real,simplesmente pq o sistema manda

5mth
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Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

The author does a good job with the writing and that is what hurts the most, the Chinese do not know how to make a good one piece plot, in short he is just a depressive child who one day woke up the system and began to obey. religiously, the protagonist has no charisma or self-esteem, he is just a robot that obeys the system, the interactions are so low and forced.

5mth
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CellebornLv2

This story is interisting and all, but I getting tired of the MC personality, in the beginning was funny but now his bored attitude is getting annoying. At least have some sense of wonder, the dude travel to a fictional universe full of fantastical shit and call himself a traveler but in no point he seems to be enjoying any of it, he is just in autopilot going where the system point him to, he barely seems to care for the power ups he is getting. I not even saying that he should be a happy-go-lucky guy just give him a goal or something, show that he is traveler because he want to explore and see the wonders of the one piece world. Ok, final thing, please have any bartender deny him a drink, at least one person in the world should tell the 10 year old kid "no" when he enter a bar alone asking for booze.

5mth
8
binahLv4

i shall read this fanfic with great intrest

6mth
8
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