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From story to plot , everything is quite well written . But everything good with the story gets pretty much forgotten with the mc. He's not even a generic one. He's just a robot with no dreams or ambitions. His interactions are incredibly bland. And the system just slaves him around . That's another negative point of the story.

well to be honest i found it really monotonous the mc only cares about alcohol and the sign-in also feel like he has no personality whatsoever and every character he meets tries to recruit him. besides those it is good if you don't have any other fanfic to read.

mc is like a depressed overpowerd teenager, and everyone around him acts as a conserned mom trying and failing to break him out of his depression. anyways good story, I hope it continues

The translator is doing a good job at making the story more appetizing but it's soooo boring I have read a lot of Chinese fanfics but this one take the cake for the most monotone,boring,repeating story ever.whenever he goes to a new location all the npcs have the same dialog and reactions.

This is really good. Mc is a traveller with a system. His system makes him interact with one piece characters to get rewards. In a way he is like Hawkeye - traveling alone and drinking alcohol (sake).

O MC é praticamente um robô sem personalidade nenhuma e escravo do sistema,tudo se resume a ele viajando para fazer login e beber sem nenhum propósito real,simplesmente pq o sistema manda

The author does a good job with the writing and that is what hurts the most, the Chinese do not know how to make a good one piece plot, in short he is just a depressive child who one day woke up the system and began to obey. religiously, the protagonist has no charisma or self-esteem, he is just a robot that obeys the system, the interactions are so low and forced.

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i shall read this fanfic with great intrest