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Knight_Noctis
Knight_NoctisLv48mth
2024-09-04 01:41

From story to plot , everything is quite well written . But everything good with the story gets pretty much forgotten with the mc. He's not even a generic one. He's just a robot with no dreams or ambitions. His interactions are incredibly bland. And the system just slaves him around . That's another negative point of the story.

One Piece: Starting by Refusing Shanks

Gered
4.1
367 Chs

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Ron_Dera
Ron_DeraLv1

من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي

8mth
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Leylindd
LeylinddLv14

yes

Ron_Dera:من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي
7mth
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Deuteronomy
DeuteronomyLv10

nice

Ron_Dera:من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي
7mth
viloh
vilohLv6

alright, for anyone curious about what was said in arabic, here's a rough translation not word for word since i'm on my phone and have to read a couple of lines and remember them (since the keyboard takes half of the screen and the comment box takes the other half) as i translate in my mind it's clear that the MC Isn't a social person and that he doesn't hate being alone he also enjoys traveling between diffrent islands and trying out a variety of foods and drinks the author wants him to be like haw-eyes and in the future we will see his effects on characters like sanji kuina and zoro

7mth
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Kratossonofzeuz
KratossonofzeuzLv14

I read it i think this is google translated weird why did he write it in arabic

Ron_Dera:من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي
7mth
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Shang_D_Shiran
Shang_D_ShiranLv4

Huh?

Deuteronomy:nice
5mth
Shang_D_Shiran
Shang_D_ShiranLv4

What?

Leylindd:yes
5mth
Shang_D_Shiran
Shang_D_ShiranLv4

Exactly

viloh:alright, for anyone curious about what was said in arabic, here's a rough translation not word for word since i'm on my phone and have to read a couple of lines and remember them (since the keyboard takes half of the screen and the comment box takes the other half) as i translate in my mind it's clear that the MC Isn't a social person and that he doesn't hate being alone he also enjoys traveling between diffrent islands and trying out a variety of foods and drinks the author wants him to be like haw-eyes and in the future we will see his effects on characters like sanji kuina and zoro
5mth
Shang_D_Shiran
Shang_D_ShiranLv4

Ok now that I understand this, I agree with all my haki.

Ron_Dera:من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي
5mth
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Gered
GeredAuthor

Feel free to ask me anything, and I'll do my best to answer with what I know about this book. If you notice anything lacking in the quality of the novel, please let me know. I've tried to translate as free of Chinese elements as possible and have changed the Chinese names to fit One Piece characters. I'm always looking to improve, so if you spot any issues with the translation, I'd appreciate your feedback to help me enhance my skills. For this whole week, you'll receive chapters every two hours. I hope you'll support me so I can continue releasing two chapters every two hours next week as well.

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RedSaint
RedSaintLv11

well to be honest i found it really monotonous the mc only cares about alcohol and the sign-in also feel like he has no personality whatsoever and every character he meets tries to recruit him. besides those it is good if you don't have any other fanfic to read.

8mth
DecayedTree
DecayedTreeLv3

mc is like a depressed overpowerd teenager, and everyone around him acts as a conserned mom trying and failing to break him out of his depression. anyways good story, I hope it continues

8mth
DocAnubis
DocAnubisLv14

The translator is doing a good job at making the story more appetizing but it's soooo boring I have read a lot of Chinese fanfics but this one take the cake for the most monotone,boring,repeating story ever.whenever he goes to a new location all the npcs have the same dialog and reactions.

8mth
R0B
R0BLv2

This is really good. Mc is a traveller with a system. His system makes him interact with one piece characters to get rewards. In a way he is like Hawkeye - traveling alone and drinking alcohol (sake).

8mth
manolohard
manolohardLv1

O MC é praticamente um robô sem personalidade nenhuma e escravo do sistema,tudo se resume a ele viajando para fazer login e beber sem nenhum propósito real,simplesmente pq o sistema manda

8mth
Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

The author does a good job with the writing and that is what hurts the most, the Chinese do not know how to make a good one piece plot, in short he is just a depressive child who one day woke up the system and began to obey. religiously, the protagonist has no charisma or self-esteem, he is just a robot that obeys the system, the interactions are so low and forced.

8mth
MarXox130
MarXox130Lv4

the translator is amazing but the history is trash Mc is complete apathetic have no goal or objective i don't know why such good translator is wasting his time with this kind of novel

8mth
adgjkzxc
adgjkzxcLv12

Heres how the story goes: MC gets to new island, signs in, power up, throw in a popular character, popular character gets surprised at his potential, tries to recruit him and gets rejected. Repeat. Same thing at least till chapter 40, repeated like 5 times. MC feels like an edgy teenager.

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