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CPT_SpaKeLz
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2024-10-29 20:22

The title and Synopsis is Clickbait. Dont waste your money, Its not worth it. Basically every Chinese PTSD is present. The apple store employees looking down and Face Slapping. Treatment of Old man with Acupuncture and Chinese Medicine. Let me elaborate a bit, He enters the room to take a look at the oldman and all of sudden his heart is crashing. He starts CPR like any medical Professional. The doc enters an says he is killing him. like dude thats CPR!!! Then he goes on to start Acupuncture and Orders Chinese Herbs. Keep in mind MC is western and takes place in England.

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Risaliyah
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He does not even use the accupuntre but okay, and just because he uses medicine that is not western does not mean that its chinese… just because he uses ginseng as one of the materials its chinese…

CPT_SpaKeLz
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Look bro just cuz you read too many Chinese Novel doesn't mean the world works like that. You can't just put together a few herbs and treat a Heart disease or any major disease. Do you even know what Ginseng is even used for? And you will never find those herbs for Sale in England by Chinese names. You could have completely gone another way than this miracle vodoo doctor route and maybe go towards the "The good Doctor" route. Remember who your Audience are. These people are PTSD patients. You are basically scamming them.

Risaliyah:He does not even use the accupuntre but okay, and just because he uses medicine that is not western does not mean that its chinese… just because he uses ginseng as one of the materials its chinese…
Risaliyah
RisaliyahAuthor

Bro the novel is clearly nicknamed as chinese novel on steroids, of course it will have chinese elements… i never said it wont have any and it did and yes you can find ginseng under that name in england… I’ve seen many. Thanks for the review. Have a good day

CPT_SpaKeLz:Look bro just cuz you read too many Chinese Novel doesn't mean the world works like that. You can't just put together a few herbs and treat a Heart disease or any major disease. Do you even know what Ginseng is even used for? And you will never find those herbs for Sale in England by Chinese names. You could have completely gone another way than this miracle vodoo doctor route and maybe go towards the "The good Doctor" route. Remember who your Audience are. These people are PTSD patients. You are basically scamming them.
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