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Sergiu_Chirita_3966
Sergiu_Chirita_3966Lv13mth
2024-10-31 21:46

Author, this is starting to get annoying. Not every action of the main character needs to be a face slap situation; there needs to be balance. At first, it was fine, but when there are such situations in every chapter, and sometimes two in a single chapter, it becomes boring and repetitive. It’s becoming more of a cliché than it already is, making it hard to read.

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Risaliyah
RisaliyahAuthor

Brother, i don't know what novel you are reading but it's definitely not mine. Because at most, there is 3-4 face slapping situations in 135 chapters...

Sergiu_Chirita_3966
Sergiu_Chirita_3966Lv1

I agree. I'm currently on chapters 22-23, and I can't say that these are face slap situations in the literal sense, but I think there are too many moments where the main character faces situations where he's underestimated and boasts about how great he is. Especially in chapter 23, where he's on a date with an older woman, but he behaves like an impulsive teenager just to set up a situation where he can show off his status as a restaurant owner.

Risaliyah
RisaliyahAuthor

Bruh he just took her to his restaurant what!

Sergiu_Chirita_3966:I agree. I'm currently on chapters 22-23, and I can't say that these are face slap situations in the literal sense, but I think there are too many moments where the main character faces situations where he's underestimated and boasts about how great he is. Especially in chapter 23, where he's on a date with an older woman, but he behaves like an impulsive teenager just to set up a situation where he can show off his status as a restaurant owner.
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