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BigRig
BigRigLv152mth
2024-10-17 01:54

Been reading this novel and seen quite a lot of people being negative on the comments and saying it’s a copy and paste/ Chinese stereotype novel…. It’s not even close to being one, pretty good novel to read if you ask me. Characters are described in detail, shoot even when he’s in the school it describes everything and goes into detail with some classroom questions and the author took time to go and get answer to the math, science, and history problems he put into the chapters. If it was Chinese the author wouldn’t even go into detail for the school chapters would’ve just been went to school went home next day. The development is pretty good not to slow but not crazy fast, the system is op when the choice appears but the Mc has to have a problem to face before the system appears with 3 choices. So far it’s been a good novel to read, it’s interesting, the writing style of the author is awesome, the more you read the more you can get hooked if you like a Mc that has a system, slice of life, and not to slow but just right paced story development. One last thing read the novel give it a shot, it’s a good read!

Ultimate Choice System: I Became The Richest!

Risaliyah
4.1
202 Chs

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Risaliyah
RisaliyahAuthor

I appreciate the time you took out of your time to write my novel a review, thank you for the nice review.

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Superman_v091
Superman_v091Lv3

Maybe the novel is good but for the mc to be cucked first then his system came this...what to say 😂 Without his system his girlfriend cucked him so there can another chance where he is getting cuckold lol

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Superman_v091
Superman_v091Lv3

That system should go to the guy who cucked the og protagonist 🤣

Superman_v091:Maybe the novel is good but for the mc to be cucked first then his system came this...what to say 😂 Without his system his girlfriend cucked him so there can another chance where he is getting cuckold lol
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Risaliyah
RisaliyahAuthor

Hello, Author here! This novel is a slice-of-life story centred on an ordinary protagonist life after getting a golden finger. What set this journey apart is that you won't have to deal with an idiot seeking death every chapter. Set in England, you'll be immersed in the sights and sounds of city life as the protagonist grows, learns new skills, and tackles both familiar and extraordinary situations. Expect plenty of humour and lighthearted moments that cheer you up. If you’re looking for an urban Chinese web novel with LOGICAL SENTENCES on STEROIDS, then this novel is for YOU!

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CephalonCoda
CephalonCodaLv15

TLDR: Its a great book thats written well, but fair warning, the main character is a psychopath (like actually, not slang). I am writing this review for 2 reasons; One: The book is very good, and deserves the recognition, although I will hold off from writing a more in depth review currently due to the story still being in its early stages (chapters 1-100 feel like the prologue, and while it has been very enjoyable it definitely seems like the gloves have just been removed, and shits about to go down in the best way). And reason two is a disagreement with some reviews I've seen, who are claiming that the book springs this darker tone on the reader out of nowhere. Not to be rude, but are you guys reading the same book that I am? His extreme levels of controlling behavior, possessiveness, and calculating mind popping up through the entire beginning of the story have been basically broadcasting this change on a huge neon sign for most of the book. It was obvious to me that he was like this even around chapter 40. it's well foreshadowed. I think you guys are all just too used to normal system books on here. My main issue was probably the situation in chapter 92-95... that whole breaking and entering thing didnt really match what he has shown, but in my head im kinda treating it as an mental breakdown kinda thing, hopefully one he doesnt make often, as there is a difference between enjoying that sort of stuff and doing whats "Necessary". With that being said I think the author has done a very good job, the System is very unique and interesting (and as a bonus note, my main gripe with the system has been addressed in the later chapters, that being the options always had only one actually viable option, the others were just significantally worse, which I very much like, thank you author.), and the main character seems to be a psychopath that is written correctly and its very interesting to read.

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CPT_SpaKeLz
CPT_SpaKeLzLv4

The title and Synopsis is Clickbait. Dont waste your money, Its not worth it. Basically every Chinese PTSD is present. The apple store employees looking down and Face Slapping. Treatment of Old man with Acupuncture and Chinese Medicine. Let me elaborate a bit, He enters the room to take a look at the oldman and all of sudden his heart is crashing. He starts CPR like any medical Professional. The doc enters an says he is killing him. like dude thats CPR!!! Then he goes on to start Acupuncture and Orders Chinese Herbs. Keep in mind MC is western and takes place in England.

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Risaliyah
RisaliyahAuthor

Author here, leave any questions to me here if you want.

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Sergiu_Chirita_3966
Sergiu_Chirita_3966Lv1

Author, this is starting to get annoying. Not every action of the main character needs to be a face slap situation; there needs to be balance. At first, it was fine, but when there are such situations in every chapter, and sometimes two in a single chapter, it becomes boring and repetitive. It’s becoming more of a cliché than it already is, making it hard to read.

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Lucifer7030
Lucifer7030Lv5

was good in the start and had potential then bam, edge lord came out.

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brix_jocker
brix_jockerLv2

It is a high-class novel and I loved the sequence of events that brought me into the world of the novel as if I were the hero despite the delay of the chapters. I loved the novel and I see a promising future in it. I hope that there will be more chapters, and if possible, I will hurry up and thank you 🥇🎉

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Peerless_Scans
Peerless_ScansLv11

Amazing slice-of-life novel, it's a nice read the life of the main character Noah is really interesting too, another banger by Risalyah. This novel has lots of potential, keep it up. I can see it taking the rankings. A good read if you want a large amount of dopamine.

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DevilKing666
DevilKing666Lv14

This book remind me of a novel i read long ago with the title So Pure So Flirtatious

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Tango_Alpha
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Hope no Harem ?..........................

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