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BigRig
BigRigLv153mth
2024-10-16 17:54

Been reading this novel and seen quite a lot of people being negative on the comments and saying it’s a copy and paste/ Chinese stereotype novel…. It’s not even close to being one, pretty good novel to read if you ask me. Characters are described in detail, shoot even when he’s in the school it describes everything and goes into detail with some classroom questions and the author took time to go and get answer to the math, science, and history problems he put into the chapters. If it was Chinese the author wouldn’t even go into detail for the school chapters would’ve just been went to school went home next day. The development is pretty good not to slow but not crazy fast, the system is op when the choice appears but the Mc has to have a problem to face before the system appears with 3 choices. So far it’s been a good novel to read, it’s interesting, the writing style of the author is awesome, the more you read the more you can get hooked if you like a Mc that has a system, slice of life, and not to slow but just right paced story development. One last thing read the novel give it a shot, it’s a good read!

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Risaliyah
RisaliyahAuthor

I appreciate the time you took out of your time to write my novel a review, thank you for the nice review.

Superman_v091
Superman_v091Lv3

Maybe the novel is good but for the mc to be cucked first then his system came this...what to say 😂 Without his system his girlfriend cucked him so there can another chance where he is getting cuckold lol

Superman_v091
Superman_v091Lv3

That system should go to the guy who cucked the og protagonist 🤣

Superman_v091:Maybe the novel is good but for the mc to be cucked first then his system came this...what to say 😂 Without his system his girlfriend cucked him so there can another chance where he is getting cuckold lol
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CephalonCoda
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TLDR: Its a great book thats written well, but fair warning, the main character is a psychopath (like actually, not slang). I am writing this review for 2 reasons; One: The book is very good, and deserves the recognition, although I will hold off from writing a more in depth review currently due to the story still being in its early stages (chapters 1-100 feel like the prologue, and while it has been very enjoyable it definitely seems like the gloves have just been removed, and shits about to go down in the best way). And reason two is a disagreement with some reviews I've seen, who are claiming that the book springs this darker tone on the reader out of nowhere. Not to be rude, but are you guys reading the same book that I am? His extreme levels of controlling behavior, possessiveness, and calculating mind popping up through the entire beginning of the story have been basically broadcasting this change on a huge neon sign for most of the book. It was obvious to me that he was like this even around chapter 40. it's well foreshadowed. I think you guys are all just too used to normal system books on here. My main issue was probably the situation in chapter 92-95... that whole breaking and entering thing didnt really match what he has shown, but in my head im kinda treating it as an mental breakdown kinda thing, hopefully one he doesnt make often, as there is a difference between enjoying that sort of stuff and doing whats "Necessary". With that being said I think the author has done a very good job, the System is very unique and interesting (and as a bonus note, my main gripe with the system has been addressed in the later chapters, that being the options always had only one actually viable option, the others were just significantally worse, which I very much like, thank you author.), and the main character seems to be a psychopath that is written correctly and its very interesting to read.

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