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Sin_of_sloth
Sin_of_slothLv52mth
2024-09-07 22:02

the first few chapters felt like a slog but after that it just got better and better, at chapter 30 I couldn't wait to read more of this. i love the concept and the way the author combined the world's. to the author: if you need help or ideas for stuff like the rituals be sure to ask us readers or just look up ideas on the internet. I'm sure that can get pretty difficult.

HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error.

Hooin_Kyoma
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212 Chs

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Hooin_Kyoma
Hooin_KyomaAuthor

Thank you very much!! I will make sure to depend on you guys more!! After all, I'm writing for you! Make sure to always keep writing about the things you love and the things you don't! The constant feedback helps me immensely both in general and in fleshing out the story!

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Blood_soaked_bar
Blood_soaked_barLv10

I am reading this however I want to know will you bring the Eldridge horror from the Lord of mystery to this fanfiction or not?

Hooin_Kyoma:Thank you very much!! I will make sure to depend on you guys more!! After all, I'm writing for you! Make sure to always keep writing about the things you love and the things you don't! The constant feedback helps me immensely both in general and in fleshing out the story!
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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

I'll keep reading. Really havn't enjoyed the first 10 chapters tho.

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SpaceZeph
SpaceZephLv14

1. Heads up for newcomers The MC, Loki, doesn't know the HP Plot, but a lot of LOTM lore. The beginning can feel sluggish and weird, maybe even annoying at times, but give it time until chapter 10, that's where the fun begins! Loki doesn't have a cheat in the traditional kind of way... no system, no goldenfinger, no wishes. Instead he seems to be the only Error Pathway Beyonder. Also, personality wise, Loki feels like the love child of Danitz & Amon. 2. Review / My opinion So far (star of year 3) we still haven't seen much of the beyonder world, but it has started, I reckon this year is the prelude to beyonder shenanigans. The incorporation of Beyonder into Wizarding World is greatly executed. The interactions and bonds between the supporting cast and the MC feel genuine and well done. A little bit of plot armor here and there, but that's also a bit of "Adam's" fault. xD There are a lot of similarities between Loki and Klein, paying homage to the "original" by taking fan-favourite mysteries, names, items, etc. The story is highly addictive! I'm really bad at this but yea... TL;DR - Give the story at least 10 chapters to get you hooked. Follow Loki, the personality love-child of Danitz & Amon, on his shenanigans and adventures to liberate the money of other people, while living Ash Ketchum's wet dream by petting all the XXXXX-Creatures along the way! Highly recommended, but sadly severely underestimated story. Dunno how to end this, sooo bye?

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A_Sleepless_dream
A_Sleepless_dreamLv14

Good story cool ideas but story overall: Mc doesn’t know the world he is in nor have any understanding of magic / HP kinda get annoying when he says it 100 times and demonstrates that over and over again…. He let himself be murrdered and beaten down with his sister threatened and almost raped. Mc doesn’t look to have any guts or understanding or plan forward it is all riding on beyonders and lord of mysteries Great set up for what you have

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_Solomon_
_Solomon_Lv12

It's an excellent story imo, as this is my first lotm x hp read and you may find the story boring or edgy in the start but it gets better and we do not have much world building as of now but so far it's good and the incorporation of lotm and hp verse is also going well... the update schedule is also quite good with more than one chapter usually... I would recommend you to try reading this book

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Dcap_Nslapaho
Dcap_NslapahoLv1

MC doesn't know HP..he only knows LOTM...MC gets pass around beaten like a dog and get away by plot armor..this repeats throughout. if you're into MC's that gets beatdown then plot armor saves him..then this is for you. in short he did a ritual cause he wants to be isekied then he did just to suffer.

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Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_PradhanLv14

in starting he knows about Harry Potter World and lord of mysteries but overtime shows he doesn't know about Harry Potter novel like he doesn't know Cerberus is hagrid pet but if read the novel he would know in starting few chapters with the black matriac he shared his knowledge of Harry Potter

1mth
DaoistsiwHqe
DaoistsiwHqeLv1

Не варто витраченого часу. Головний герой ідіот. Персонажі-просто декорації. Весь світ крутиться навколо бажань головного героя, він не отримує ніяких негативних наслідків від своїх дій. Діалоги написані так, ніби автор ніколи не чув як розмовляють реальні люди. Нікому не рекомендую це читати.

1mth
Absurd_Idiot
Absurd_IdiotLv1

A unique crossover of HP and LOTM, one of the best LOTM fanfiction novels I have read that isn't a Translation. 10/10 for me. I'll give it a 5 star in everything except world background which I gave a 4 star since much isn't written yet about it.

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mido_3957
mido_3957Lv1

Really good crossover between HP and Lotm, the novel is at first but I see the potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Mamdouh_mohamed
Mamdouh_mohamedLv12

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