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ShreksterLv44mth
2024-10-08 21:35

Really good, you have improved in your writings,its clearly better than your other fanfic but you still have a long way, i hope to see you improve further [img=recommend]

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OGBUE_JOHNLv4

The chapters are just too small,it's quite vexing. The story IS good but so little chapters is nauseating. It would be great if this can be worked on.

ShreksterLv4

I do agree with you on that point but apart from that i don't have any problems.

OGBUE_JOHN:The chapters are just too small,it's quite vexing. The story IS good but so little chapters is nauseating. It would be great if this can be worked on.
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