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Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv48mth
2024-09-17 11:08

The story leaves much to be desired. It starts very suddenly. They kidnap him, threaten him, force him, all without his consent. They leave him the only way out: to die and convert, they convert him and he feels nothing. Seriously, a little bit of hate or resentment but he lets it pass as if nothing and then becomes friends with someone from one moment to the next without further ado.

The Twilight Gamer

WhiteAuthor
3.8
92 Chs

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Replies4
Aaronic02
Aaronic02Lv5

Thats why its called kidnap. it doesnt need connsent.

7mth
5
Daoist538472
Daoist538472Lv4

Aaronic02:Thats why its called kidnap. it doesnt need connsent.
7mth
9
Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

Yea, it was weird, but now with Bella possibly finding out and seeing their hypocrisy, he's planning revenge.

7mth
3
Lucas_Panzenboeck
Lucas_PanzenboeckLv13

wym he feels nothing? dude was seething with rage

5mth
1
Other Reviews
WhiteAuthor
WhiteAuthorAuthor

Aight if u got questions ask them here, ill asnwer any yall go that ain't super spoilers for chapters that havn't been released yet. I see a lot of reviews here that aren't correct cuz they just didnt read longer than 7 chapters , so ill answer them questions.

7mth

FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

5/2/1/4/4 Bro gets a system but his thoughts arent protected, proceeds to get kidnapped by the cullens and then spills the beans about his system. English quality is good though, if you can tolerate that level of bs

8mth
Douglas_Henry
Douglas_HenryLv1

bro, I tried, I swear I tried, but it's impossible to read this bulsh*t. The supposedly increased luck of the MC only serves to know whether the coin will come up heads or tails, if it is going to add a metaphysical characteristic it at least has to be used.

8mth
Mikey_3214
Mikey_3214Lv4

He reveals he is a gamer… Disappointing

7mth
R0B
R0BLv2

A lot of questionable choices, stupid decisions, not consistent system, "mysterious" original characters with supernatural abilities, stupid charizma implementation that makes mc not able to understand others or to be understood by others. With max intelligence mc makes the worst not logical decisions possible. Stats work like multiplayer to a selected race I guess? Even though stats increased when he changed his race? The whole system sucks.

7mth
StellNem
StellNemLv13

Another absolute masterpiece by WhiteAuthor. For those who have yet to read his other twilight fanfic, check it out after reading this one. Don't miss out.

8mth
Austin_Scott
Austin_ScottLv2

That's not fair why does Bella get a harem but we don't?................................................................................................

8mth
Emu_Lator
Emu_LatorLv1

Initially interested but got bored real quick. Mc left the canon of twilight films pretty early on so it kind of loses the meaning of having a fic about twilight. Might as well have made it his own universe instead of twilight. Tbh i was mislead because the cover image looked similar to sharingan but to the latest chapter, no such ability. Im removing this from my library

5mth
Shrekster
ShreksterLv4

Really good, you have improved in your writings,its clearly better than your other fanfic but you still have a long way, i hope to see you improve further [img=recommend]

7mth
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