Aight if u got questions ask them here, ill asnwer any yall go that ain't super spoilers for chapters that havn't been released yet. I see a lot of reviews here that aren't correct cuz they just didnt read longer than 7 chapters , so ill answer them questions.

5/2/1/4/4 Bro gets a system but his thoughts arent protected, proceeds to get kidnapped by the cullens and then spills the beans about his system. English quality is good though, if you can tolerate that level of bs

The story leaves much to be desired. It starts very suddenly. They kidnap him, threaten him, force him, all without his consent. They leave him the only way out: to die and convert, they convert him and he feels nothing. Seriously, a little bit of hate or resentment but he lets it pass as if nothing and then becomes friends with someone from one moment to the next without further ado.

bro, I tried, I swear I tried, but it's impossible to read this bulsh*t. The supposedly increased luck of the MC only serves to know whether the coin will come up heads or tails, if it is going to add a metaphysical characteristic it at least has to be used.

He reveals he is a gamer… Disappointing

Another absolute masterpiece by WhiteAuthor. For those who have yet to read his other twilight fanfic, check it out after reading this one. Don't miss out.

That's not fair why does Bella get a harem but we don't?................................................................................................

Really good, you have improved in your writings,its clearly better than your other fanfic but you still have a long way, i hope to see you improve further [img=recommend]

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