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Miki_Marlo75

Miki_Marlo75

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Muy desinteresado en mi entorno solo observó mí entorno como si fuesen libros que se escriben con las personas como simples títeres que cuelgan de sus hilos invisibles narrando una historia vacía

2019-11-10 JoinedArgentina
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo7513h
    Posted

    The grammar needs improvement, the story progresses well but suddenly it begins to drop information one after another without allowing it to be understood

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    In Twilight as Lion king
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo7516h
    Commented

    No

    Ch 27 Notice
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    My accidental isekai life as a Plunderer
    Anime & Comics · RoneGreninja
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  • Miki_Marlo75
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    Commented

    As long as something strange doesn't come out in the next chapters, I'm willing to continue reading.

    Ch 29 Back Home (4)
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    DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil
    Anime & Comics · Pastlives
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  • Miki_Marlo75
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    Commented

    What is the point of this battle? If you don't start from the beginning with everything, it's supposed to kill you.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Frost and Blaze.
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    Son Of The Savage (a DC Comics SI)
    TV · Saintbarbido
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo753d
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    In the next chapters he is going to ruin a bit of the character

    Ch 37 Chapter 34): Oh!
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    Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
    Movies · Flaming_Lines
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo753d
    Commented

    How do you come out with something that forgave them as if nothing had happened?

    Ch 37 Chapter 34): Oh!
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    Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
    Movies · Flaming_Lines
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo756d
    Posted

    The sad part of the story are the BOTS in the reviews with accounts from a couple of months ago and I have already seen this story published elsewhere

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    Water Bending In Marvel
    Movies · lazarus898
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo756d
    Commented

    I'm going to ignore this chapter depending on the other chapters

    Ch 104 Deals and Secrets! Part-1
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    Harry Potter: Ero World
    Book&Literature · light_novel_addict
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo7515d
    Commented

    I don't understand the power levels in this fight, it honestly doesn't make it very clear.

    Ch 326 Flame God vs Fire Dragon
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    Fairy Tail-Transmigrated In Order To Sleep With Babes
    Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo7529d
    Posted

    Confirm that the story is advancing in my opinion it is getting worse the last chapters are practically information and quick information And jump from one event to another as if nothing had happened

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    A New Life In The Arrowverse
    TV · Ezzy_E
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Posted

    I would like you to at least put the link to the original story and give some credit to the original author in the synopsis Apart from that the story is interesting and it is a good choice of translation.

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    Marvel: Journal Writing
    Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    Just an opinion that everything is becoming simpler and seems like monologues

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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Posted

    The idea for the story is good, it has a lot to develop but this seems like an idea And this would be the draft more than anything, since the story is just events after others without context and a clear timeline that determines the rhythm of the story.

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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    Thank you

    Ch 7 [|Ch.6 Candy People|]
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    Adventure Time: Shadow Elemental
    Anime & Comics · SirRandom
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    Don't you find it childish and unnecessary to explain what his attacks do to his enemies?

    Ch 290 The Last Word
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    Fairy Tail-Transmigrated In Order To Sleep With Babes
    Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Posted

    The story has many parts without context, the time jumps are random and the grammar is annoying, it is continuous text divided into paragraphs Clearly the plot jumps from development to revenge and sudden acceptance without arguments seems forced

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    Crossing The Twilight the Awakening
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    Too exaggerated for my taste

    Ch 173 167) La Piedra Filosofal(parte 4)
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    Harry Potter: Red Weasley El Extraño Mago Rojo
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    The story became too boring for my taste I don't see a clear development

    This book has been deleted.
  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Posted

    No offense but this story was already uploaded a long time ago by another author and it had more than 250 chapters translated This story is good if you take the time to read it I recommend it

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    (HP) I'm Only A Defense Against The Dark Arts Professor
    Anime & Comics · Poka_Poka
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    Starlinght

    Ch 40 Aftermath - Homelander II
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    THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander
    TV · freedomfic
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