Miki_Marlo75

Meh

I must have misread, thanks for clarifying.

I'm losing track of the plot from floor 2 or 3. Has someone suddenly reached floor 9, or am I missing something?

The story has a rather poor development, with only the MC gaining power; other than that, there's nothing, no relationships between characters, no dialogue, just a couple of sentences per chapter. And they speak with suspense, trying to create mystery and seriousness, apart from Malia who only utters a few isolated lines; I don't see any real conversation in the story.

I see that the MC is going to be a slave to the system, nothing more. That already sets the story up around the system with penalties and no free will, since everything the MC does revolves around the system.

You'd have to be messed up to read this without your head spinning. I don't know if it's an attempt at being great, but it's not even funny. The MC seems like a delusional person with no prior context from the start. The story leaves much to be desired, making me lose the desire to continue reading.

Another worthwhile story; I hope they don't abandon it and continue developing it. It's stable, without strange time jumps, and progresses at a steady pace.I really like how the story is progressing so far.

It's a good story, it's rare to see quality over quantity these days. The plot moves forward smoothly and with coherent explanations. I really recommend it, although it only has 15 chapters so far.

What happened to the grammar in this chapter? I understand the terms, but what's with taking out the dialogues and speaking as if they were scientists?

I finally found something good after searching for a while; the story shows promise and has good development considering it has few chapters without strange time jumps or inconsistencies.