Miki_Marlo75
Muy desinteresado en mi entorno solo observó mí entorno como si fuesen libros que se escriben con las personas como simples títeres que cuelgan de sus hilos invisibles narrando una historia vacía
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Just an opinion that everything is becoming simpler and seems like monologues
The idea for the story is good, it has a lot to develop but this seems like an idea And this would be the draft more than anything, since the story is just events after others without context and a clear timeline that determines the rhythm of the story.
The story became too boring for my taste I don't see a clear development