Item: One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave
Rating: 4.2
Author: Gold_Manthea

Gold_MantheaLv16mth

2024-10-15 20:44

This is great so far and I really can't wait for more and the confrontation with the various known people. Ofc this fic interests me greatly because I have wondered if Monkey D. Dragon could have made it to fleet Admiral and then maneuver the navy away from the WG somehow, instead of what ever he is doing now.

One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave

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