Item: One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave
Rating: 5
Author: Butcher_

Butcher_Lv35mth

2024-08-22 04:13

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One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave

tambeerg

4.6

185 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies5

tambeergAuthor

thanks for the review. I will upload 2 chapters tomorrow

5mth

Butcher_Lv3

thanks...this is really underrrated btw...

tambeerg:thanks for the review. I will upload 2 chapters tomorrow

5mth

LordCampioneLv15

harem story? and will the mc be a villain or the like??

tambeerg:thanks for the review. I will upload 2 chapters tomorrow

5mth

Butcher_Lv3

Not a villain..but dont know about harem..

LordCampione:harem story? and will the mc be a villain or the like??

5mth

SolrakRKLv13

for the pirates, he really seems like a villain...

LordCampione:harem story? and will the mc be a villain or the like??

3mth

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Reveal spoiler

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micheal_armondaLv3

Despite the idea being great, The writing needs a lot of improvement grammar wise, especially the descriptive language that's being used. Big shots like Big mom, garling, Rocks or whoever shouldn't be stunned and shocked at every little action that happens, no matter how small it is. For dialogue I would recommend going back to one piece and analyzing how characters actually talk because as of right now they behave like OC's. This is by far the hardest part of writing one piece fanfics. On the otherside I do commend you for sticking to a consistent upload schedule and appreciate the use of correct punctuation for the most part. And I do have one small suggestion that might sound silly: I don't think the mc name 'carl' fits one piece at all. So maybe something like 'Carlos' might? Or maybe give him a nickname to not ruin immersion. Please don't be discouraged by my review and keep writing

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tambeergAuthor

Really good story, at least the best of my fanfics. I like that it's not a canon time, the MC's unusual ethnicity, pretty quick development, he's become powerful, but it's grounded so it's not like it just fell out of the sky

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I like mc devil fruit but this story feel like there little element of young master it will be great if u change something that are too chinese. 😁😁😁 this ff are great overall

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Primero para esta aventura. Depósito la fe con un granito de arena (y para motivarte a que sigas esta magnifica obra muy poco vista en estas paginas) muy buen comienzo, espero verla terminada. No te desmotives en el tema de personas porque vendrán a su debido tiempo. Nada más que decir nos vemos y ojala la obra llegue lejos. Ánimos 💪

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