Item: One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave
Rating: 5
Author: tambeerg

tambeergAuthor8mth

2024-08-19 19:28

Really good story, at least the best of my fanfics. I like that it's not a canon time, the MC's unusual ethnicity, pretty quick development, he's become powerful, but it's grounded so it's not like it just fell out of the sky

One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave

tambeerg

4.5

290 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies9

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

couple of questions, since I've read most of it and there's romance even tho there no tag I was wondering would this be a harem? if so would there be any yuri in the harem not a fan?

7mth

BalladLv5

You're so cringe with your question like God help you.

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:couple of questions, since I've read most of it and there's romance even tho there no tag I was wondering would this be a harem? if so would there be any yuri in the harem not a fan?

7mth

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

hey man we all have preferences try not to force yours on any one, if you can't take my questions you know what to do......don't read it 😉

Ballad:You're so cringe with your question like God help you.

7mth

tambeergAuthor

From what I've read, there's something like a harem here, but the story itself doesn't spend much time on that topic.

7mth

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

that's all God for me then 😂 thanks for replying ill add it too my reading list for now 😁

tambeerg:From what I've read, there's something like a harem here, but the story itself doesn't spend much time on that topic.

7mth

tambeergAuthor

you are welcome)

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:that's all God for me then 😂 thanks for replying ill add it too my reading list for now 😁

7mth

merocameroLv4

Raw or mtl please?

7mth

AnitimescLv15

What unusual ethnicity does the MC have?

5mth

toshiseroLv4

why belittle the man for his question with his preference? you are the pathetic one with being rude to someone just because he ask a question, and its not to you.

Ballad:You're so cringe with your question like God help you.

4mth

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JhakqueZyx6Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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micheal_armondaLv3

Despite the idea being great, The writing needs a lot of improvement grammar wise, especially the descriptive language that's being used. Big shots like Big mom, garling, Rocks or whoever shouldn't be stunned and shocked at every little action that happens, no matter how small it is. For dialogue I would recommend going back to one piece and analyzing how characters actually talk because as of right now they behave like OC's. This is by far the hardest part of writing one piece fanfics. On the otherside I do commend you for sticking to a consistent upload schedule and appreciate the use of correct punctuation for the most part. And I do have one small suggestion that might sound silly: I don't think the mc name 'carl' fits one piece at all. So maybe something like 'Carlos' might? Or maybe give him a nickname to not ruin immersion. Please don't be discouraged by my review and keep writing

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Butcher_Lv3

Good shit.........................................................................................................................................................................

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TraffordLv6

This is probably the best One Piece fanfiction (non-crossover one) that I have ever read and that are out there. Everything from the world development to the powers of MC is well done. I especially like the fact that MC is a Celestial Dragon, and the story delves into the topic of the Celestial Dragons as well. The translation itself is superb.

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Sky_novel_loverLv3

Need more chapters!

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TinieblasLv3

Well, I stopped at chapter 50. The novel is really good, but I think I'll drop it. I don't like that the MC supports the Celestial Dragons and even considers killing Luffy. I thought the MC would oppose the Celestial Dragons for what they did to his friends or because of their general attitude. I even thought he would help Luffy later on or create the Revolutionary Army himself, but I was wrong.

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orangegummyLv14

I like mc devil fruit but this story feel like there little element of young master it will be great if u change something that are too chinese. 😁😁😁 this ff are great overall

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