Item: One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave
Rating: 4.6
Author: Ty_Chaos62

Ty_Chaos62Lv46mth

2024-09-12 15:06

Enjoying the fic so far. MC has pretty good development and we get to see a different side to the one piece world.

One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave

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