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Etienne_Breiland9dReplied to Adamo_AmetI like that in this version of the story the hokage is getting more suspicious and the fact dragon is still able to pass hints of him being compromised, since I never understood how someone with dragons position didn't have fail saves in case he gets himself into a genjutsu and gets compromised so as to let the hokage know .
Ch 59 Chapter no.59 At the Hokage Office- Etienne_Breiland9dReplied to Nashawn_Best
i want to read this can you tell me if its a harem? i hope so but i dont wanna start reading it and then i dont see the mc with multiple partners.
Love interest: Shall be revealed later on. - Etienne_Breiland11dReplied to Natural_SSR
like a Gladius? if so yeah that would be cool but i think him having an actual KATANA would be better since traditionally real KATANA's are short swords and with him having that he would also be able to use SAMURAI techniques, p.s i know alot of people will confuse KATANA's and NINJATO'S but im sure Author-san knows the difference.
2- Speaking of Tenten, she is going to make a custom weapon entirely out of chakra metal for Naruto. What do you want Naruto to wield? It can be any weapon because Naruto can wield any weapon. - Etienne_Breiland14dCommented
Author-San please 🙏 in this remake don't make Hinata distance her self from Naruto when he discovers who his parents are and get all emotional and shout at her to leave like the previous version, that one didn't make sense to be due to the fact they where so close already and seeing him be distraught about something and asking her to leave I don't think she should haven't left but stayed to talk about it with him so he atleast has someone to share that news with .
Ch 47 Chapter no.47 Splitting the Grain - Etienne_Breiland20dReplied to Granville4554
yes he just changed minor stuff I'm not mistaken you can still read that one on royal road even. you'll see the small changes there
[ Description: Tenten is on the verge of unlocking the class "Herald of Hephaestus." Fight her and force her to awaken ] - Etienne_Breiland20dCommented
this makes more sense Author-san in the previous version Tenten was basically the herald of a god of swords but after her awakening she started forging weapons and that didn't make sense to me but here she becomes the herald of the right god and I can see her path of weapon forging better sothing this
[ Description: Tenten is on the verge of unlocking the class "Herald of Hephaestus." Fight her and force her to awaken ] - Etienne_Breiland20dCommented
This makes sense 👏 and I can actually see this type of development happening within this kinda ninja world it's hella cutthroat literally lol but for people who fall short of their dreams after working so hard and still being belittled I can see them doing that, Author-San continue with the great work.
Anyway, if Naruto declines, Tenten throws herself into training until her breaking point, until the Chunin exams happen and, due to her pushing herself and not resting and recovering, loses to Temari and then commits suicide. - Etienne_Breiland28dCommented
Author-san it says the link is invalid or expired can you plz update it so we can get access to your discord?
https://discord.gg/DXv2nkTB - Etienne_Breiland6mthReplied to Shane_Town
I'm curious to know how old are the girls Faye and Diana in the story rn?
[14] - Etienne_Breiland8mthCommented
if this is true can someone tell me more about this story?? i wanna know what the rich did to the redditors.
But whew, talking about the interests of the elite? Are you trying to die? On earth, around 10 years ago, a bunch of Redditors bullied the elite through the stock market. However, the retribution from the top was swift and brutal, also showing us just how much they controlled. - Etienne_Breiland8mthReplied to Kotario
Hey Author-San I just noticed that there is no harem tag to this story and I'm wondering if you forgot to put it on here, and if you don't want this story to be a harem story?.
[This is the SDI, the Standard Display Index, for all living beings in the Eternal universe when they undergo any scan. Each category has a different meaning. The 'User' denotes who the AI chip is registered to.] - Etienne_Breiland8mthReplied to Joshua_Taylor_9828
think bro he is sharing the exp with all his minions that just means the Queen most have been at least level 150-200.
"50,000 experience points which mean that the strength of that ison should have been quite high." He rubbed his chin, trying to calculate an approximate level. - Etienne_Breiland10mthReplied to hot_papichulo
I just hate her.
"It's time to hit the municipal library." - Etienne_Breiland11mthCommentedCh 202 CH 197: ARE YOU INTERESTED IN WINE?
- Etienne_Breiland11mthReplied to Bradley_9456
bruh compared to whom you can't just leave it like that??
let the sky above be our witness and this greenery around be our cheap boudoir while these warm sun rays be blessings sent from above to our union, I won't let you ever leave me , Mark my words deep into your heart, deep into your very existence of soul,for you are gonna suffer with me for eternity so just trust me unconditionally as I make your suffering your greatest source of joy and happiness in this life", saying I finally closed her mouth with mine as I felt tears started running down her eyes. - Etienne_Breiland1yrCommented
Did you mean LAPD?? What does the extra P stand for.??
Most likely, the LAPPD would act soon. There was too much evidence to show that this case was beyond what was natural. - Etienne_Breiland1yrReplied to StarDork
nope Natalia is the one with the crystal not June lol dude reread the paragraph
"Me too... How about watching them then?" Natalia puts her hand in her pocket, her hand seems to disappear for a few seconds, and then she pulls out a crystal ball. - Etienne_Breiland1yrCommented
What does BGM mean??
Her passionate moans were almost like a suitable BGM for the event as Alex leaned forward, his muscular chest pressing against Patricia's extremely soft breasts, squashing them down.