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BlackFunLv143mth
2024-08-14 09:19

The beginning was really amazing and the Gamer element nicely done. BUT now that it seems that every Stark gains the Gamet System the whole individuality of Jon is gone. Jon our MC is now just one of a lot of Gamers and he is no longer unique. Absolutely not my cup of tea... Maybe the author could write another version parallel to this one but the center is focused on Jon and HIS Gamer System... This is something I would prefere very much.

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PuddingLord
PuddingLordAuthor

That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.

FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Glad i saw this review, thanks for the save bro

Hugo_Adam
Hugo_AdamLv4

I haven't read this fic, but I don't think there's anything unique about this aspect when you consider that me and quite some people dropped the original "gamer" novel(The gamer) because of the party feature, as the protagonist started sharing the system with everyone. So, assuming this fic is somewhat similar to the og gamer when it comes to the lack of uniqueness of the protagonist, I won't read it .

PuddingLord:That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.
Noer_Sy
Noer_SyLv4

Same.

FinnsRevenge:Glad i saw this review, thanks for the save bro
kikna007
kikna007Lv4

saved my time thanks

UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburgLv4

Meh try to be original and you end up with shit. It happens after all it completely turned me off.

PuddingLord:That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.
Eruvadhor
EruvadhorLv4

Yeah, nobody likes power sharing

Hugo_Adam:I haven't read this fic, but I don't think there's anything unique about this aspect when you consider that me and quite some people dropped the original "gamer" novel(The gamer) because of the party feature, as the protagonist started sharing the system with everyone. So, assuming this fic is somewhat similar to the og gamer when it comes to the lack of uniqueness of the protagonist, I won't read it .
batman_3_3_
batman_3_3_Lv4

unique isn't always better

PuddingLord:That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.
PuddingLord
PuddingLordAuthor

True, in the comments I have said this before. But I will say it again, this story isn't for everyone, I also don't enjoy it all that much sometimes.

batman_3_3_:unique isn't always better
mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5

yes, just bad, there is something different about trying hard to do something extremely bad

PuddingLord:That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.
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