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BlackFun
BlackFunLv148mth
2024-08-14 09:19

The beginning was really amazing and the Gamer element nicely done. BUT now that it seems that every Stark gains the Gamet System the whole individuality of Jon is gone. Jon our MC is now just one of a lot of Gamers and he is no longer unique. Absolutely not my cup of tea... Maybe the author could write another version parallel to this one but the center is focused on Jon and HIS Gamer System... This is something I would prefere very much.

Gamers in Game of Thrones

PuddingLord
4.0
112 Chs

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PuddingLord
PuddingLordAuthor

That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.

8mth
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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Glad i saw this review, thanks for the save bro

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Hugo_Adam
Hugo_AdamLv4

I haven't read this fic, but I don't think there's anything unique about this aspect when you consider that me and quite some people dropped the original "gamer" novel(The gamer) because of the party feature, as the protagonist started sharing the system with everyone. So, assuming this fic is somewhat similar to the og gamer when it comes to the lack of uniqueness of the protagonist, I won't read it .

PuddingLord:That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.
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Noer_Sy
Noer_SyLv4

Same.

FinnsRevenge:Glad i saw this review, thanks for the save bro
7mth
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kikna007
kikna007Lv4

saved my time thanks

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DarthMairon
DarthMaironLv4

Meh try to be original and you end up with shit. It happens after all it completely turned me off.

PuddingLord:That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.
7mth
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Eruvadhor
EruvadhorLv4

Yeah, nobody likes power sharing

Hugo_Adam:I haven't read this fic, but I don't think there's anything unique about this aspect when you consider that me and quite some people dropped the original "gamer" novel(The gamer) because of the party feature, as the protagonist started sharing the system with everyone. So, assuming this fic is somewhat similar to the og gamer when it comes to the lack of uniqueness of the protagonist, I won't read it .
7mth
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batman_3_3_
batman_3_3_Lv4

unique isn't always better

PuddingLord:That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.
6mth
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PuddingLord
PuddingLordAuthor

True, in the comments I have said this before. But I will say it again, this story isn't for everyone, I also don't enjoy it all that much sometimes.

batman_3_3_:unique isn't always better
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mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5

yes, just bad, there is something different about trying hard to do something extremely bad

PuddingLord:That is a good idea but then the story would just be another generic gamer story. I believe the author was trying to be unique l.
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Darkmageoftime
DarkmageoftimeLv4

Thanks for the save Bro.

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TJ_Rose
TJ_RoseLv14

So you don’t want to read a fanfic where the Mc is at a constant challenge?

FinnsRevenge:Glad i saw this review, thanks for the save bro
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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

TJ_Rose:So you don’t want to read a fanfic where the Mc is at a constant challenge?
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ANANTAVIJAYA1961
ANANTAVIJAYA1961Lv4

It was good at start but the main point of being protagonist is lost when you give same powers to everyone . Its's utter garbage

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Shadow_Hunter_4334
Shadow_Hunter_4334Lv4

At first, it started well with only Jon as the gamer, and knowing the background, it could do something powerful by chapter 6. Now that Bran and Sansa are gamers, what's the next idea? Making all the family gamers and taking some revenge on the world? 1 gamer is good, but already 3 and maybe more—not for me, and good luck for the future of this when anyone is able to level the continent.

8mth
Kyriam
KyriamLv2

Thanks for the translation and your comments are much appreciated, I hope we see the end of this story.

8mth
Josh_Wilko_5256
Josh_Wilko_5256Lv14

were is chapter 3 and chapters 4 and 5 are wrong way around unless they are just numbered wrong

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Oleg_Nikitin
Oleg_NikitinLv1

Сначала я думал, что только Джону достанется система. Потом пошли его родственники. Затем, хоть и в урезанной версии, супруги. Скоро это всё превратится в типичную песочницу ММОРПГ.

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Fardhin_Jafar
Fardhin_JafarLv4

i really like how your using old valyria in the story.I wonder why no other fanfiction thought of this.

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XLRCosta
XLRCostaLv4

Loving the book, you should make roob take some leardship skills and be a great commander. Kepp it up

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Henrique_Aaa
Henrique_AaaLv3

NICE Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice............................................

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Kavindu_Ruwanara
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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💟💟💟💟💟 so far so good. It was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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