The beginning was really amazing and the Gamer element nicely done. BUT now that it seems that every Stark gains the Gamet System the whole individuality of Jon is gone. Jon our MC is now just one of a lot of Gamers and he is no longer unique. Absolutely not my cup of tea... Maybe the author could write another version parallel to this one but the center is focused on Jon and HIS Gamer System... This is something I would prefere very much.

It was good at start but the main point of being protagonist is lost when you give same powers to everyone . Its's utter garbage

At first, it started well with only Jon as the gamer, and knowing the background, it could do something powerful by chapter 6. Now that Bran and Sansa are gamers, what's the next idea? Making all the family gamers and taking some revenge on the world? 1 gamer is good, but already 3 and maybe more—not for me, and good luck for the future of this when anyone is able to level the continent.

Thanks for the translation and your comments are much appreciated, I hope we see the end of this story.

were is chapter 3 and chapters 4 and 5 are wrong way around unless they are just numbered wrong

Сначала я думал, что только Джону достанется система. Потом пошли его родственники. Затем, хоть и в урезанной версии, супруги. Скоро это всё превратится в типичную песочницу ММОРПГ.

i really like how your using old valyria in the story.I wonder why no other fanfiction thought of this.

Loving the book, you should make roob take some leardship skills and be a great commander. Kepp it up

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