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Guard_the_AzkabanLv25mth
2024-09-27 07:40

I'm sorry but I can't stand it, it really is an incredible FF and it has a lot of potential, the grammar is good and it has a good plot to follow, but I hate, I HATE, that bad things constantly happen to the mc, he literally can't find any happiness, I think the author should distance all these events against him for longer than just the first year and a half. They literally tortured him with Crusiatus in his first half year, that's too much. And not to mention relationships, it seems that he doesn't have a single true friend, even considering the circumstances and his identity, the way others treat him is too much. That's why I can't continue anymore, I was really captivated by the idea and everything, but it just made me angry to read what was happening and I got tired.

A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)

Nuclide
4.5
86 Chs

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AspiringPedoLv4

That’s why I dropped it at chapter 16, bro got grusomely tortured in the middle of Hogwarts castle and no one seen a single thing, haven’t even heard a peep, not even the omnipresent portraits and house elves seen anything, and these are just regular kids too, not any genius masterminds, Gets semi-permanently crippled, loses very important and sentimental items just like that, not even possible to get them back, and the perpetrators were probably never even found. My blood was already boiling, and I knew he wasn’t going to get any justice anytime soon, if at all, so I just dropped it straight away. I mean I know they say revenge is a dish best served cold, but damn, at this point the dish gonna be so cold, it’s ice!😂

1mth
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Ototsu_YumeLv11

Thanks for the warning, there are far too many fics lately with a sadistic author that just loves to abuse their mc while turning everyone around them into villains.

1mth
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Saw_CleaverLv1

Well, I'm not sure if the author will see this, but I just want you to know that I really loved the book. Easily one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. And while I'm sure there are others who love the book as much as I do, most webnovel readers are sort of hermits; they are strangely reticent to engage in any interaction with the author. Unless it's one of those novels that whip up their horniness, where they send requests for a woman to join the harem - I personally don't really like those kinds of stories - which I think is the worst part of the readership on this platform. I've seen many great works end up with writers losing their enthusiasm for writing because they didn't get enough support from their readers, and I can imagine how that feels. Writing is a really difficult job; I know this very well as I am currently working on my own, the muse often plays the unattainable, and even just writing a paragraph can sometimes take hours, but in comparison, it takes only minutes for readers to consume an entire chapter... Haahhh.... My point is, I just saw your book yesterday and I'm on chapter 42 today. I really enjoy the work you created and I hope you complete it 😁

7mth
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GzeroXLv4

Reveal spoiler

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NuclideAuthor

Review should be more than 40 characters

8mth
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Jeet_ChattopadhyayLv4

This is one of the best fanfic I have read in a long time especially the way you integrate the wizarding world and the Assassin brotherhood I really would like to see how the story progresses further so I would urge you not drop this.

7mth
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Cha0sTheoryLv15

Honestly, might be the best Harry Potter ff I've read, and I've read a lot. I actually was late to a meeting I was running because I got too caught up in the story. Did feel guilty as hell making up excuses about traffic, haha. I'd sign up for a reasonablly priced patreon as well. Hopefully the author doesn't drop.

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SORCERERSUPREME_7Lv2

You wrote wrong information about india in chapter no 45 that father married with their daughters in india 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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MidnightSpeedsterLv1

I've decided to give you a complete five out of five stars simply because this is the second AC and HP crossover I've seen so far and from what I've read so far, it's going really good. In fact, I liked it so much that I even made a second fanfic image title for it I hope you like it.

8mth
5
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Kil0Lv4

Really excellent fic! I love that the MC is very strong but doesn’t have a bunch of political influence. It’s super interesting reading about how the MC has to struggle and scheme in the dark against both sides which allows him to show off his strength and wits. Most other fics with strong MCs tend to steamroll everyone with goblin inheritances or random marriage contracts which kind of defeats the point, why be strong if you can send dumbledore to jail? I really appreciate the work the author has put into all the changes from canon while keeping a coherent plot. You have done a wonderful job! Can’t wait for triwizard shenanigans, I’m sure dumbledore will have some fun bringing harry to the center stage…

7mth
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LeirbagfcbLv2

A história extrapola todos os limites imagináveis do que é uma fanfic e se encontra em uma obra quase original. I thank you for the oportunity of reading this ff. This is dense in the right amount and has all the right points tô be the best. The main character has his priorities right and. For the first time, the introduction of a Crossover was SO SMOTH. It is amazing the hability of engaging two world in one so easily and bealiveble. THANKS FOR THIS MASTERPIECE AUTHOR.

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