Hello there! It seems tradition for authors to leave the first review and who am I to deny it. I'm new at writing. This is my first time writing anything seriously so I'm not sure how good or bad it will be. Though I hope you will like it. If you have any critiques and advice I'll be grateful to receive it. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to ask. As long as it's not spoilers I'll try to answer.
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LIKECassian is the protagonist and Nico is the deuteragonist. Basically Cassian is the main character and Nico is the secondary main character. Think of the dynamic between Gon and Killua, Naruto and Sasuke, Goku and Vegeta. It’s like that.
There aren’t two mcs. The older brother is the mc, while the younger one is a deuteragonist, like Killua in hxh, Sasuke in naruto or Vegeta in db. But it’s your choice and preferences. Good luck.
I haven't really read the story, but the lack of harem deters me. And what you said about being 2 female leads, but it would not be centered around the MC gives a lot of Yuri vibes. To be honest, because this is a single female lead(?), then you have to be careful about who you choose to be that lead. If it was a goddess like Hestia, then I believe most people would be satisfied. However, if you choose that lead to be any random adventurer like Lily, Haruhime, or even Ais... Then most people wouldn't like it because their favorite 'waifu' didn't get chosen. Yes, a harem done right requires skill. But in worlds like DxD and Danmachi, I believe it is a must... Unless you choose the strongest and most liked female, in which case I have nothing to complain about I personally tend to avoid fanfictions that take place in a harem world, but where the MC doesn't make a harem.... Not because he can't, but because the Author forces that on him. In harem worlds like Danmachi and DxD, there are only two options- a harem, or no romance at all. If you don't have the confidence to make a harem done right, then you should not develop romance at all. Instead, you should focus on the MC's development- either in character or strenght.
I appreciate the advice but I don’t find it disgusting as long as it’s two women. Even more so when it makes sense. But I’m undecided about romance and what form it should take, so I’ve decided that when the time comes, I’ll ask the readers and have them vote about what they would prefer.
To each his own, personally I hate anything that comes close to partner sharing and ntr, whether it's a woman or a man.
I respect your opinion, I guess it’s just a difference in ideologies. I share your hatred for ntr and partner sharing, but it doesn’t extend to two women who you are in a relationship with. Though if it was a random woman your partner sleeps with, then I consider that cheating and ntr.
I respect your opinion, I guess it’s just a difference in ideologies. I share your hatred for ntr and partner sharing, but it doesn’t extend to two women you’re in a relationship with. Though I would consider cheating and ntr if your partner slept with a random woman.
And then there's much less chance and sense in doing that than in making a harem, knowing that in this world there are no l*sb***s apart from Loki, but then again she's just making jokes.