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while all of this is really good, how would hermione criticise snape , and "all this years" she is in her first week. i love your pacing , but one a bit slower with smal shifts in time may be more useful that a moderate one without pause. Keep your narative, but watch a bit from Enchanting Melodies to get a real feeling of the pacing. And try to keep your characters from talking about things they shouldn't know at diffrent points in time , even if it's au
there are sacrificing tehniques that can do tremendous damage , that are forbidden by both sides in order to keep a hidden ace for the respective village , if kyomu stole that tailed beast from a village , the people from there wouln't care about winning and go full kamikaze for mutual distruction. thatbis the reason you don't cross the bottom lines of the enemy in a war. most wars are a means to achieve a goal , not just to eliminate the enemy. if it was so simple why they didn't fully destroy sand village earlier
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a whole village plus mercenaries , without considering her other previous actions while in war and with unspeakables
bracers are like a highly adaptable shield if you pay attention, so you can protect the rest of the body
He was involuntary emotionally atached with the old man , grief can take many forms like anger or apathy , when anger immediately gave him trouble he went back to apathy with a litle kick
and how would the peasants look at him if he uses his full powers and transforms them in red mist ?
In old times it was the same here too. it was organised in a big city (capital) with vilages sourounding it .
what good wife , you prostitute your husband left and right
But he's right , he is going for his wife sake , and if this wording makes her dislike him , that's a win in his books
i never understood why it would matter that the girl likes him, you don't see harems in reality because we understand that when you are in a relationship you don't go for other girls and you don't go for a man or woman who is married no matter what. By your standards if a man likes a woman she sould automatically fall in love with him ?
maybe it can revive, maybe it's body in itself can produce an unwanted effect.
weren't there seven in the first place ?
and who let them become this weak both mentally and magically ? i tell you a seret , he looks like gandalf!
to be honest i never understood this wait and see aproach, if you are in a good position waiting will lower your chances, and if you are in a bad situation, waiting without brainstorming for a new plan will 9 out of 10 time lead you to an even worse outcome.
where is this gif from ?