Hello there! It seems tradition for authors to leave the first review and who am I to deny it. I'm new at writing. This is my first time writing anything seriously so I'm not sure how good or bad it will be. Though I hope you will like it. If you have any critiques and advice I'll be grateful to receive it. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to ask. As long as it's not spoilers I'll try to answer.

very very promising. keep up the good work author

I shall give this 5 stars but I must say I am disappointed in the author for not having already written 3548 chapters I am very disappointed and let down

Okay, in this story, despite what the synopsis says, the story has a protagonist, who is the older brother Cassian, and the story spends most of its time from his point of view. Now, in terms of the story, it is a plot that has been developing at a stable and realistic pace. Some changes to the Danmachi plot, for me, will be very well received, especially the fact that Bell's story takes place in just 1 year. In this story, the author decided to stretch this time to several years, which in my opinion is very smart, especially for the development of the story. I recommend -> 8.8/10 This analysis was made in chapter 28.

New author as i expected... you broke the rule number 8, search for the "The Sacred Rules for creating fanfiction" here on webnovel, i will not give you one star because its a common occurrence that happens to new authors, i will give you 3 to encourage you. God luck in the path.

I’m liking this concept of two main characters don’t see this often but still I’m liking the way this fic is progressing so far and I’m looking forward to seeing how this story develops Keep cooking author

You said this is your first time writing novel and I must say you are better writer than most people there, keep up good work and I can't wait for more chapters and how well they will grow up

As of Chapter 7: Overall Rating of 4.2 Writing Quality: It's pretty good. Very minor mistakes in punctuation but good nonetheless. There was a part where I became unimmersed in the story but if you ignore that it was good overall. Story Development: It's very good. Not much to say other than there is a small amount of chapters so far. Character Design: I like the characters so far, others might dislike the little brother, but I think it's good. Updating Stability: Need more chapters, 'Nuff Said. World Background: It's done decently enough. Things are explained nicely, but I don't think people who don't know anything about Danmachi should read this, they may end up confused. Overall a 4.2, looking for to more and also to seeing the authors improvement as we go along. P.S. If MC visits brothels, I'm out, no questions asked.

Man, this is the best. When you get tired of rushed stories that get dropped, when you get tired of extreme characters the have just one adjective, when you get bored of the robotic/idiotic/unnatural conversations between caracters .... when you looked through tens ,hundreds fanfictions and start to think of uninstalling webnovel.... there comes a secret diamond, a well made story, with intriguing plot, with world development, character development, realistic conversations and responses. Author, my good sir, you have my thanks for posting this story !