The author is a good person. I would even say that he is an incredibly good person. You can ask your questions about the work and maybe about everything else. I will answer as much as possible.

The idea is intriguing, as no one seems to consider this hero and his abilities. Recently, everyone has been obsessing over Tony Starks and endless Spider-Men, but Reed Richards stands out in this context. Moreover, it appears that the source material is the comics, not the films, which is another advantage.

It was great at first when it started, but soon the author's heavy reliance on A.I. completely ruined this story...

The fanfic is good and unique, but the author needs to review their chapters. Most scenes show signs of ChatGPT. There's nothing wrong with using it for some ideas or correcting spelling errors, but the tool makes the story overly melodramatic with cliché words that are easy to spot.

I will be honest. I liked the story but hated the execution. There is just so much clutter we have to swim through to just understand a simple sentence. Writing is extremely cringe. Stop using AI, it ruins your story completely. Best of luck with the story but I am out.

Synopsis has a misleading statement about Franklin being a mutant that stops me from even reading the first chapter but I will give it a go at it anyway .

Too much forced plot… it seems like the author wants their fanfic to be mediocre. At first, I thought I’d found a diamond, but it turns out I found glass.

Great so far! Hopefully you release more chapters and don’t drop it

Yeah, no. I couldn't read past chapter 24 of this fic. Don't get me wrong, the premise is fine and the plot itself is okay, it's just that the way it's written deeply annoys me. It's pretty apparent from the get-go that the fic uses ChatGPT, and I wouldn't have any issues with that if it weren't for how its abundant use in the fic utterly ruins the feel of the whole story. The AI makes the fic feel very melodramatic, which really makes some parts hard to read, like with Richard and Susan's flirting. Aside from that, the characters seem less like their own person and more like robots wearing their features, and this is due to them not having any distinguishing details in their dialogue that makes them feel like they're the actual characters speaking. For example, what would differentiate a hillbilly character from gentleman character if they're both speaking in a refined manner? You would expect the hillbilly to instead be less sophisticated in his speech because that's in his character, no? The thing about this though, is that I completely understand why they had to use ChatGPT to write this fic. Writing genius characters is very hard when you aren't a genius yourself, after all. And no, that isn't a veiled insult, it's a real thing that most authors who've attempted to write the same type of character have experienced. Still though, despite the rating I gave here, I don't think it's all that bad. It beats reading those trashy intelligible edgy SI-OC fics any day.