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Daoist_Godfiend
Daoist_GodfiendAuthor5mth
2024-06-29 19:49

Like who gives their own book a five-star review. I didn't want to do this but I had no choice. I'm writing this review for readers who have questions. Please ask your questions below. This is my first book and I hope not to disappoint. Thanks for reafding 💙

Getting A System In A Modern World

Daoist_Godfiend
4.1
323 Chs

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Slc4free
Slc4freeLv15

Is there any romance? If so will he have 1 waifu or a harem?

5mth
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Daoist_Godfiend
Daoist_GodfiendAuthor

I'm sorry to disappoint but no harem

Slc4free:Is there any romance? If so will he have 1 waifu or a harem?
5mth
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April_Damian_9478
April_Damian_9478Lv3

before I get into this, does this story involve romance pls?

5mth
April_Damian_9478
April_Damian_9478Lv3

so there any form of romance in this story pls?

Daoist_Godfiend:I'm sorry to disappoint but no harem
5mth
Daoist_Godfiend
Daoist_GodfiendAuthor

no

5mth
1
Daoist_Godfiend
Daoist_GodfiendAuthor

I don't really plan to add romance to it but if I decides to in the future, it will be very light. A type of romance you won't even notice at all.

5mth
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FraulC
FraulCLv14

Was this a re-upload or rewrite? I know I've read this before, but does not appear on my read list.

Daoist_Godfiend:no
5mth
Daoist_Godfiend
Daoist_GodfiendAuthor

reupload

FraulC:Was this a re-upload or rewrite? I know I've read this before, but does not appear on my read list.
5mth
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CephalonCoda
CephalonCodaLv15

I do have a question. As someone elses question was answered, saying it is a re-upload, will that happen again? as it would suck to have the coins spent on chapters have to be spent again if it gets taken down and re-uploaded again. The second question is that im curious how long of a book you're aiming to make with this story? Ive managed to pick up quite a few possible paths the story could take that keep stepping up the stage, and so Id probably assume 300+ eventually but wanted to ask to see how far out your plans actually go with this story length wise.

5mth
Daoist_Godfiend
Daoist_GodfiendAuthor

contracted books can't be deleted or re-uploaded. I deleted the book and started reuploading because I was away for a while and the only way to revive the book was to delete and reupload. So, fret not.

CephalonCoda:I do have a question. As someone elses question was answered, saying it is a re-upload, will that happen again? as it would suck to have the coins spent on chapters have to be spent again if it gets taken down and re-uploaded again. The second question is that im curious how long of a book you're aiming to make with this story? Ive managed to pick up quite a few possible paths the story could take that keep stepping up the stage, and so Id probably assume 300+ eventually but wanted to ask to see how far out your plans actually go with this story length wise.
5mth
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DaoistfSTZgu
DaoistfSTZguLv15

no updates

4mth
Daoist_Godfiend
Daoist_GodfiendAuthor

what do you mean?

DaoistfSTZgu:no updates
4mth
Hank_9794
Hank_9794Lv2

fair enough usually i drag authors for reviewing their own books but urs passes the vibe check

4mth
Ikka_Sne
Ikka_SneLv14

oh yes! ty ty ty😭🥰 this is so rare.. i like this kind of story, but freaking try and find 1 without romance its basicly imposible!

Daoist_Godfiend:I don't really plan to add romance to it but if I decides to in the future, it will be very light. A type of romance you won't even notice at all.
4mth
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Hades_Empartas
Hades_EmpartasLv1

I have a question, will MC transform from a childish person who takes most things slowly into a ruler who makes the most logical choices without hesitation in the future?

4mth
DaoistuK3Ovv
DaoistuK3OvvLv4

I made a comment I think will help you so pls read it and tell me what you think

Daoist_Godfiend:what do you mean?
3mth
1
DaoistuK3Ovv
DaoistuK3OvvLv4

I replied to you read it

Daoist_Godfiend:what do you mean?
3mth
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yodhavu
yodhavuLv3

why does there's a an adult warning in the intro page as No One 17 and Under Permitted. In my point of view it's a good story for every age... ( So far I read...)

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Madison_Smith_2480
Madison_Smith_2480Lv2

This book is very good, but I have a question is the protagonist dating an AI??

Daoist_Godfiend:I'm sorry to disappoint but no harem
10d
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I'm so sorry to write a bad review, but I found this novel to be really mediocre. I read 26 chapters and couldn't go on anymore as I felt that I was actually wasting my time on it. - The MC is as dumb as a rock. He is truly stupid. - The pacing if the story is messed up, on one hand, the progress with the system is way too fast it feels like it's being expedited, but on the other hand, the actual plot (if there IS one) hasn't really even started yet. - There are some passages that are just awkward and it feels like they were just inserted in the middle of random scenes. like the time the MC is going to buy a house and some random secretary starts feeling turned on lol, don't get me wrong I don't mind smut and erotica at all but the scene felt so out of place. it had nothing leading up to it and no follow up either... - The English is actually decent. I don't remember seeing grammatical mistakes and I'm usually meticulous about that so, although the writing style is average but the grammar is solid. I will not be continuing this novel, but those who like stories like this might enjoy it more than me so I still suggest people give it a try and judge by themselves, and I wish the author much more progress and success in the future.

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Personally speaking, I feel like this book has potential ;it being a rebate type system, however the fact that it's EXTREMELY fast past, and I do very much emphasize the extremely really throws readers off because it's pace is faster than the luxury cars being introduced after only what...2 days? that alot of things are not fleshed out and the characters aren't given much depth because of this. For example, he suddenly drives a luxury car despite being poor and depressed 24-48 hours before yet his brother has 0 reactions or thoughts, his father's girlfriend is like 'oh well, he probably won the lottery. He takes his brother shopping, packs the bags into the car after purchasing a luxury watch(which, by calculations should have been over his budget) , yet there's no mention of the brother after and he just goes to his new condo to sleep....where did the little boy disappear to during the shopping trip? There are actually a lot more plots holes that stems from the novel being too fast pace. Hopefully the author slows down, reviews and revise and insert some necessary filler chapters and patch the holes.

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Reveal spoiler

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Empyreal4
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Great story, author. I hope you continue at the same pace.١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١

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