Review done at chapter 40. Honestly this novel is just a cookie-cutter version of other novels in this genre. The story is running at 1000 mph, often resulting in mistakes or plot holes that can take one out of the story. This results in characters just being cardboard cutouts of people or being thrown to the side, such as the MC’s family. Additionally, the MC is just not engaging or interesting in my opinion, he feels like an empty vessel just being dragged around by the story, rarely facing any pushback or opportunities to really grow outside of fake raising his stats. I say fake because while he upgrades his stats, he still feels like the same person. Despite having intelligence stats 10x stronger than the average human, he sounds and acts like a clueless bumpkin most of the time that impulsively does things. Also this story is kinda predictable that there’s rarely any unique twists to this story. It feels like I’m reading a lower version of Getting a Technology System in The Modern Day. Honestly I would say if you like this genre that story is 10x more thought out than this one and characters are more interesting.
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It gets 100% worse later on. The dipshit of a writer gives him 3 billion system point and he’s doesn’t buy teleportation and keeps flying everywhere on a plane, he doesn’t protect his family, is too cheap to spend a few thousand point on a new pod apparently and just leaves shit loads of points and lottery in his system. The writer is very dim witted on that front and there is no general cohesive thought to the overall story, it’s one shiity whim to another
