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UndeadRoseLv329d
2025-01-14 17:28

5 2 1 4 3 so I'll list all the things I liked about the story first before getting into the things I didn't like. first of all the translation is immaculate. Barely any bs Chinese sayings so that's a plus. It was great how the author went through each myth and put their own spin on it, so that kept the story flowing nicely especially if you already knew the original legend. Another thing that was enjoyable was the sheer amount of gods and goddesses mentioned and interacted with. And bow for the things I didn't like: Tajes him way to long to die, we're over 200 chapters in and still hasn't died and it's getting boring to read. The Mc's name is pretty stupid and it only became tolerable 50 chapters in, when I became numb to it. There is EXTREME PLOT ARMOUR he's basically never in danger and all the gods love him for no reason, and the only reason any of this happend is because he's weak and pretty. It's annoying how petty the Mc is, and as you'll later find out golden apples that are forced upon are consistently used as a plot device to make Bs happen. even the gods who don't like him suddenly do a 180 in attitude. The Mc gets so annoying that I hope he just dies in a stupid way which wouldn't be that surprising considering all the stupid stuff he does. He also never seems to be thankful to the people who help him in the later chapters and likes to go back on his words saying things like "then was then and now is now" to get out of things. Basically nothing in this story would have happend if he didn't have EXTREME plot Armour and wasn't mistaken for someone else here's to hoping he dies soon because this is getting hard to read

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