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RodolfoMaou
RodolfoMaouLv137mth
2024-06-25 06:43

The writing in this fanfic is truly remarkable. The chapters are meticulously structured, maintaining a perfect balance that keeps readers hooked from start to finish. Each chapter ends in a way that leaves you eagerly anticipating the next, creating an addictive reading experience. The protagonist stands out as a fascinating character, defined by a somewhat selfish personality that adds depth and realism. His human flaws and the way he navigates through them make him incredibly relatable and compelling. Watching him interact with the world around him is one of the story's highlights, as his actions and decisions reveal layers of complexity and potential for growth. The subtle hints of character development sprinkled throughout the narrative keep readers invested in his journey, eager to see how his experiences will shape him. Setting the story during World War II is a brilliant choice that sets it apart from many other fanfics. The wartime backdrop is vividly brought to life, with battles that are both thrilling and strategically grounded. The author's attention to detail in depicting military strategies adds a layer of authenticity that enhances the overall experience. The protagonist's personal goals intertwine seamlessly with the historical setting, driving the plot forward in a way that feels both grounded and aspirational. The changes he brings about create intriguing possibilities for world-building in future chapters, leaving readers excited for what’s to come. As I write this review, the first arc has been finished on a fantastic way and I can’t wait to see where the story will go next.

SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)

EmmaCruzader
4.7
39 Chs

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EmmaCruzader
EmmaCruzaderAuthor

Surprisingly I haven't given myself a review yet, like any self-respecting egocentric author this will get 5 stars in all sections. Thanks for all the support! Give me your power stones :D

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LastGod
LastGodLv5

so... i thought this was VERY GOOD. The problem is you have a chapter called voglebaum..... World mashups NEVER work. Because plot holes develop and are never solved, so if this is, instead of turning into a cool SI of marvel. Turns into a mash up of the boys and marvel.... then that's the end of this story, really cause then you basically have an immortal murder hobo who will kill all that oppose him. Also, fitting some of these characters into a world already full of mutants, inhumans, Eternals, cosmic beings, godlike aliens, etc.. is almost impossible. Messy is always the results and of course the author always drops it when it get to much a mess to solve the plot.

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Darth_Ullyses
Darth_UllysesLv5

we need more.. but no rush keep up the good work

8mth
Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

please don't drop this it is the only good Captain America si on this whole app

8mth
1emanresU
1emanresULv1

Looks promising, it's well written, the story is developing in an interesting direction and even though the author calls the MC a self insert, instead of the usual personalityless blank sheet we have an actual character a personality. Looking forward to the next chapter.

8mth
YESandYES
YESandYESLv4

I think it's pretty good so far..........

8mth
Zakino
ZakinoLv14

Introducing Compound V to others was horrible decision. Author already introduced mutants unneccesary which never works in any ff and now this. Disappointing.

6mth
SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

booo how dare you make a good story and then destroy it with adding the boys when not needed or wanted it was good till you wanted more "plot" when we had mutants then you changed raven and charles Xavier's fate and then you decide to add vogelbaum

6mth
GhostAKilla
GhostAKillaLv14

Will you have the radiation power ?Keep it up man

8mth
gutless
gutlessLv15

it's peak .

5mth
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