It’s definitely a good story, but lacks substance. It’s slow going where even when a chapter is dedicated to training 50% or more of the chapter is just the MC thinking about, “how it’s so much work” or “how I’m so lazy”. They’re a very flat character and I’d hope that the author is going to change his mindset, otherwise this will be a very boring, non entertaining story. Because reading about a character who just wants to exist with no problems, no ambition, is just a doomed plotline with middling character arcs and a non satisfying ending. My only other complaint is how everythings going so slow, but that’s probably just because we’re still in the prologue and everythings being set up. Overall it’s a very good story so far. It’s just that if the MC dosen’t grow or have a change of character this story is going to plummet off a cliff, crashing and burning due to lack of anything actually meaningful to read or look forward to. (Written at the time of chap 14 being out)
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LIKENevermind I actually put this out at the time of chapter 13. The cover for the story just says there’s 14 chapters out including the auxiliary chapter with the MCs powers.
I'll do my best. In the advanced chapters he is changing a bit, but that's only my perception. Tell me what you think when we reach them.
Sure thing, my only worry is that they’ll stay a lazy, unambitious person who just wants to live with no goals or motivation.
soooo... what did u think..?
They’ve got ambition and an actual drive, but nothings really happened as of the latest chapter to really see how the MC goes about doing it. It’s definitely a cut above your average MHA fic and is deserving of a read, but main conflict hasn’t really occured due to the MCs presence actually having an effect in canon (which is a plus). But in the latest chapter it’s like a few chapters away from happening. I overall think it’s a great story that branches out without fully cutting off the canon and should it continue uploading and actually finish will be worth your time.
oh okay thanks
No problemo
Could you recommend some good mha fanfics please
Don’t got any right now since all the ones out right now are just shit or harem
