the only reason this story is popular is because its sus it's got great technical writing, but the execution is middling, chapters filled with redundancy, sighs every 10th sentence, 5 chapters could be reduced to 2, and you wouldn't lose any concept of the story or mcs thoughts. like naruto filler. everything else is basic MHA si, but mc doesn't know much about the plot

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It’s definitely a good story, but lacks substance. It’s slow going where even when a chapter is dedicated to training 50% or more of the chapter is just the MC thinking about, “how it’s so much work” or “how I’m so lazy”. They’re a very flat character and I’d hope that the author is going to change his mindset, otherwise this will be a very boring, non entertaining story. Because reading about a character who just wants to exist with no problems, no ambition, is just a doomed plotline with middling character arcs and a non satisfying ending. My only other complaint is how everythings going so slow, but that’s probably just because we’re still in the prologue and everythings being set up. Overall it’s a very good story so far. It’s just that if the MC dosen’t grow or have a change of character this story is going to plummet off a cliff, crashing and burning due to lack of anything actually meaningful to read or look forward to. (Written at the time of chap 14 being out)

This is the peak of fanfic, this is why webnovel has a reason for existing

THIS IS A MUST READ!

I like the power set of our main character, this caught my interest, requesting the author to not to drop this

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