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kessu91Lv119mth
2024-05-06 02:31

Meh spoke too soon. The point system is literally just the Deus Ex of this to explain why he can cast magic he has no source of knowledge on despite having zero indication it should provide any knowledge in the first place. Guy has spent zero points on his actual base stats and wasted them all to increase his "talent" on singular branches of magic. Yet somehow the "talent" also increase his stats to make him able to use those magics. Just read a chapter where he uses Fiendfyre on the level of the Dark Lord without having added a single point to his Will. And then explains how the reason he can use it is because its all about your Will... He also whines about his lack of memory despite having a literal stat to increase it. The generic Gary Stu who knows everything and can do everything with no real explanation how he can do those things. This is made worse by the fact that his system can increase his innate abilities to explain why he is better than everyone else yet he has in 200 chapters not raised them a single F time while somehow surpassing everyone in the school with zero efforts...

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LeonTorallaLv14

Can you tell me if this fic harem or no-harem? or who is the love interest?

Primordial_SaiyanLv4

Thanks for the save.

Blood_soaked_barLv12

What exactly are you talking about? From what I read until now the dude did upgraded his talent Twice by chapter 24 And is born in a magic family he may not have access to spell book but he has access to theories and application of magic and after he got his wand, he literally trained for Long time even after school, he continue his training and studying, so of course he will be better than everyone else and you literally only read two chapters so what are you going on about?

SadarsaLv4

Must have still enjoyed it, you gave it 5 stars.

_Solomon_Lv13

the only problem I have with this book is that by the end of his second year, he has surpassed most of the wizards and it's mentioned that only Dumbledore can stop him... plus Hermione is way too annoying here with her being able to understand the advanced magic like him... in the books she was only obsessed with getting first rank not obsessed with magic itself...

Blood_soaked_bar:What exactly are you talking about? From what I read until now the dude did upgraded his talent Twice by chapter 24 And is born in a magic family he may not have access to spell book but he has access to theories and application of magic and after he got his wand, he literally trained for Long time even after school, he continue his training and studying, so of course he will be better than everyone else and you literally only read two chapters so what are you going on about?
_Solomon_Lv13

Another problem is with the Chinese cultivation theory of unity of the qi, spirit, and body

Blood_soaked_bar:What exactly are you talking about? From what I read until now the dude did upgraded his talent Twice by chapter 24 And is born in a magic family he may not have access to spell book but he has access to theories and application of magic and after he got his wand, he literally trained for Long time even after school, he continue his training and studying, so of course he will be better than everyone else and you literally only read two chapters so what are you going on about?
Blood_soaked_barLv12

Let me put it to you in the simpler term someone who walk around every day and someone who go to the gym and exercise every day. Who do you think will Beat the other if you leave experience and all that jazz aside I am speaking about raw power between someone who exercise his magic every single day and someone who only use it when he needs it and don’t forget about our lovely system Which make him exercis with steroid second if you speak about Hermione only caring about being the first in her class in the original book you have to understand first and foremost she’s 11. This means she’s impressionable and usually you are who you are walking with and second the protagonist is purposely trying to guide her to become a researcher so what do you expect will happen.

_Solomon_:the only problem I have with this book is that by the end of his second year, he has surpassed most of the wizards and it's mentioned that only Dumbledore can stop him... plus Hermione is way too annoying here with her being able to understand the advanced magic like him... in the books she was only obsessed with getting first rank not obsessed with magic itself...
Blood_soaked_barLv12

As for this, I’m not sure I didn’t reach this section of the story

_Solomon_:Another problem is with the Chinese cultivation theory of unity of the qi, spirit, and body
_Solomon_Lv13

I've read the raw version of this and the chinese theory of unity is repeatedly mentioned there and it ruins the experience... For the most part I can ignore his age but the mention of cultivation topics in a wizarding novel feels irritating... but it's a pretty decent read overall...

Blood_soaked_bar:As for this, I’m not sure I didn’t reach this section of the story
_Solomon_Lv13

Valid point tbh, probably it's just me who doesn't like Hermione as fmc in fics nowadays

Blood_soaked_bar:Let me put it to you in the simpler term someone who walk around every day and someone who go to the gym and exercise every day. Who do you think will Beat the other if you leave experience and all that jazz aside I am speaking about raw power between someone who exercise his magic every single day and someone who only use it when he needs it and don’t forget about our lovely system Which make him exercis with steroid second if you speak about Hermione only caring about being the first in her class in the original book you have to understand first and foremost she’s 11. This means she’s impressionable and usually you are who you are walking with and second the protagonist is purposely trying to guide her to become a researcher so what do you expect will happen.
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mickroLv14

So I will break down why I dislike this story. 1.) The Chinese MC hypocritical view on gods, Chinese people claim to be atheist but in this story and most story's they always want to be a god I find it frustrating to read these two faced MCs and its frustrating to see this type of attitude as it just comes off as only I can be a god any other god but me is a fake god. 2.) The main character feels like a mild psychopath his reasons for obsession and pursuit of magic come off as petty and not very reasonable. 3.) The repeated emphasis on his lack of enthusiasm towards others and his relationships is dull and uninspiring as it gets beaten to death repeatedly and used as and excuse to often cover up for his lack of personality. 4.) MC personality- Based on his lack of motivation towards interacting with others, it just makes him seem more petty and he puts in zero effort to have any meaningful connection if he sees no immediate benefit which isn't the norm for people and the author tries to make this out to be a special trait for him but it just causes him to seem weird in my opinion. The people who claim that its normal for people to only seek out others for their own benefit are obviously not normal and I find the idea that they think it is worrying as they seem to have physiological issues. Remember I said its not the norm but not that it doesn't happen thank you. 5.) The ideas on magic have some merit and seem interesting, but this is ruined by the fact that this kid is only 1st year when he starts exploring those ideas with by the end of his 1st year only having the equivalent of 3rd year level knowledge I just find the whole idea that he comes up with all these ideas that later prove right far fetched and make it hard to me to believe. 6.) The jumps in logical reasoning for him to figure out the chamber of secrets information so easily with just partial bits of information was unnecessary as the author gave him half baked knowledge of the first book and nothing else yet he was able to piece together the whole plot of the second book in the matter of a summer with little information. I feel this was just a plot hole being filled when it was easier to just say he had half baked knowledge of all the books then pick and choose what is missing and what is available. I know this is just a fictional story and I shouldn't get to hung up on realistic interpretations but I have my preferences and opinions on what I enjoy to read and I dislike power fantasy, HP is a universe with low-magic so the whole premise of this book breaks the world view in my opinion making it a bad story. The philosopher stone is the ceiling of Alchemy in the story and the side effects are well described making the idea of becoming a god or immortal beyond that unlikely and whimsical I can see the story wanting to take the path of cultivation novel and it probably will.

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