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....this was some cringe S. First he pulls out from 1 women and starts to work on another right after without even considering the morality of it and now suddenly he has a full mental breakdown for something that literally means nothing... Even if they hadn't performed the ritual what exactly would have changed? He would have still been raised by the same people in the same way and he would have grow up to be the same POS to whom women are apparently collectibles...

First of he met those because he insisted on following the plot like some lost puppy. Hes literally forcibly inserted himself into a plot involving several different gods trying to expand their power and several angels trying to become gods. So if hes sort on time its because a baseline human who already proved that HP magic is useless decided it would be a good idea to meet all the big players within a time span of a week. Because apparently hes so sort on time that he just has to do everything within the hour with zero preparations because of reasons. And your entirely ignoring the tattoo stopping time in the LotM universe while MC is gone. Do you even understand what power level we are talking about here? Its literally stopping the gods of that world without any of them actually noticing that the time stop is happening and somehow the dog/entertainment/random lucky person has no spiritual protections or ownership claims on him? Also yes it would take time to experiment. However did you legit just gloss over the fact that he drank the corpse juices of an eldritch God because it would take time and experiments to make something himself? That's like reincarnating into Warhammer and then right after being born selling your soul to a chaos god because the galaxy is dangerous... And finally the HP magic being useless. The canon doesn't really go in depth what it actually is yet it is able to utilize and abuse things normally considered as "higher" forces in fiction. Like space, time, soul, life, death etc. It also seems like a universal not earthly force meaning it would by design be above even the true God from which all the sequences originate. Since omnipresent cosmic force that uses souls as a conduit, grants the ability to alter reality by will alone and works in a completely different universe at least sounds like something above a limited albeit powerful "God". Not claiming he should have been OP from the start. But someone like Dumbledore or Grindelwald is easily around a demigod if we are going by the limited stuff show in the books/movies/other media. And even with all the nerf BS going on he still took down people in the 9th and 8th sequence with relative ease. So all this rushing makes no sense apart from forcing him into the plot and the tarot club...

Is this cringe Azkaban thing gonna continue the whole fic? The level of mental gymnastics needed for actual adults to look at a 11 year old and think he ending up in a prison at 7 is somehow his fault is on the level of a collective brain damage. I mean I get it, MC gets to act all edgy but this is turning into one of those dogS bashing fics and we aren't even at the school yet...

And the title is "The Invincible Stag"... lmao....

Well I guess the complete dismissal of HP magic should have glued me in this gonna be another Klein C-Kboi fic... First of why did he drink the potion in that world? Nothing indicated the potions/powers needed him to be there to work. Secondly how does he have something attached to him that can literally stop the time of an entire universe but somehow can't stop a random nobody from corrupting him? And finally did the all knowing author forget the potions are literally pieces of an eldritch God? Legit just went ahead and tainted himself with something that wants to restore itself back into one instead of even considering that maybe combining the magic/alchemy of HP with the stuff in LotM could have yielded an alternative path not bound to the insane Gods of that world...

A New World by alexandertheII on fanfic. Has 2 sequels on same site.

??? Legit just wrote this after that fight scene?

Yeah F this... Hes literally just a random kid with web shooters... This isn't a F nerf this isn't even Spider-Man to begin with...

Great another one of these... Like the F comics don't nerf him enough already the F fanfics also needs to do this S...

"Potential unleashed". Takes a hit from a random baseline hobo with a rusty kitchen knife LOL....