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Oh and now suddenly hes hard and ready to..... READ THEORY.....
Fair? She literally did nothing while the inbreds were insulting his family and spewing out racist slurs at everyone and MC needs to be reminded that his a dark lord in the making and needs to remember that? The H is his name in anyway related to what any normal person would do in his stead?
This is literally 90% theory while using spells from different branches of magic including potions and herbology... Did you write the prologue and then just have an AI produce a second Ron for the story? I mean this is an entirely different person. An annoying whining child who's lazy and useless....
Really? He reincarnated into a world of magic and he finds history boring? And now hes just dismissing entire branches of magic because hes now apparently a real 11 year old and the entire F childhood arc meant nothing?....
Which was literally MAGIC. So much so that he completely ignored everything else. And now suddenly magic is boring so he doesn't want to do that? So what exactly is he doing then?
Every 2nd chapter is him talking about how he can't rely on canon knowledge and then right after he dismisses things based on canon knowledge while pretending like a training room is useless. Even better is what canon is he talking about? Because nowhere is it said you can get forbidden books inside the room. Could have literally added anything from the multiple games there are to some secrets hidden by the founders or just sell all the junk since hes been training enchanting and curse breaker since toddler but no lets just skip it to be "unique"...
Okay this constant moaning is getting F old... His entire backstory was everyone talking about how much he loved magic and now suddenly hes Ron version 2.0. Reading is literally the only way he has right to learn magic so why the F is he whining non stop about as if hes actually 11 years old? Where the F did the maturity, that entire first half of the book was about, go?
Armando Dippet... Haah this is some Chinese translation isn't it? With the chicken BS?
???? The war with Grindelwald is supposed to be starting not ending in 1938....
Just to clarify when you look at HP magic it seems they are connected to some primordial force which they channel through themselves to alter reality. This would also explain the need for a wand since their own body acts as a medium making it hard for them to push the magic outside. This would then make the wand/or chanting/or rituals a sort of external path that draws magic from their bodies and allows for greater acts of magic. So it should be a limit of their mind and body that determines the power of a wizard not some random amount of substance they use chunks of to cast spells. Meaning mental strain the more complex the magic is and physical strain when channeling the magic through their body into the wand. Which would make sense why they start with simple spells and repeatedly practice them strengthening their mind for more complex spells and training their bodies tolerance to increase the power they can use.
Literally using it for the very reason its bad... Also what Dumbledore? He cast 4 spells and fainted like a basic B. He literally did 10 times that the first time he was practicing his dueling. Its a cliche overused anime plot device to skip scenes while making it seems like the MC gave his all. Except that when used like this it just makes him look weak and pathetic for no reason. Also you never explained how your magic system works. Because this doesn't seem like HP system. More like some mage from an RPG with a manapool...
Don't do this... This constant "falling unconscious" anime BS is bad. It adds nothing to the story in a situation like this and just makes the MC look weak and pathetic. You don't need to have him faint constantly to show MC is tired out.
So why the F did she not kill it first before starting to mutilate it?
That would have literally crippled him permanently and most likely result in his children eating him............
Isn't the demon part already like another soul inside of her? So she should not have an animagus form to begin with.
Or gun. Every real urban magic caster should have an enchanted revolver that shoots demon killing bullets.
They lived during the witch hunts. Obviously defensive and attack magic would have been the first things they learned. Not how to turn sticks into needles.