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  • kessu91
    kessu914h
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    Its fine. Only issue I have with this is MCs room temperature IQ when utilizing his system. Like actually makes me cringe whenever he adds points to his talents...

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    Hogwarts: The Unscientific Wizard
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  • kessu91
    kessu913d
    Commented

    Oh and now suddenly hes hard and ready to..... READ THEORY.....

    She was about to add a few explanations, but noticed Ethan was already completely focused on the blackboard, so she stopped herself and watched.
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    Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness
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  • kessu91
    kessu913d
    Commented

    Fair? She literally did nothing while the inbreds were insulting his family and spewing out racist slurs at everyone and MC needs to be reminded that his a dark lord in the making and needs to remember that? The H is his name in anyway related to what any normal person would do in his stead?

    Ethan was a little stunned by her words, as while they sounded threatening, they were fair. A small smile, not condescending, but one of happiness found its way on Ethan face, and seeing this, the Transfiguration teacher felt pleased.
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    Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness
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  • kessu91
    kessu913d
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    This is literally 90% theory while using spells from different branches of magic including potions and herbology... Did you write the prologue and then just have an AI produce a second Ron for the story? I mean this is an entirely different person. An annoying whining child who's lazy and useless....

    As for DADA, he simply liked the subject. There wasn't much more to it.
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    Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness
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  • kessu91
    kessu913d
    Commented

    Really? He reincarnated into a world of magic and he finds history boring? And now hes just dismissing entire branches of magic because hes now apparently a real 11 year old and the entire F childhood arc meant nothing?....

    History of Magic was by far the most boring subject, Herbology, he hadn't tried yet, but he doubted he would like, and Potions… well, Ethan wouldn't say he disliked it, but it, again, sounded a bit like a bother to learn recipes and such.
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    Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness
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  • kessu91
    kessu913d
    Commented

    Which was literally MAGIC. So much so that he completely ignored everything else. And now suddenly magic is boring so he doesn't want to do that? So what exactly is he doing then?

    So instead of wasting his time in searching aimlessly for that room, he reasoned he might as well use this time to do things he liked.
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    Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness
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  • kessu91
    kessu913d
    Commented

    Every 2nd chapter is him talking about how he can't rely on canon knowledge and then right after he dismisses things based on canon knowledge while pretending like a training room is useless. Even better is what canon is he talking about? Because nowhere is it said you can get forbidden books inside the room. Could have literally added anything from the multiple games there are to some secrets hidden by the founders or just sell all the junk since hes been training enchanting and curse breaker since toddler but no lets just skip it to be "unique"...

    Ethan wasn't interested much in making potions either, so the Room of Requirements really had no appeal to him. The only real use Ethan saw for the room would be for exercising his magic, which was normally forbidden in between classes, but Ethan had already thought of several places where he could make magic without being seen, so again, it wasn't much.
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    Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness
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  • kessu91
    kessu913d
    Commented

    Okay this constant moaning is getting F old... His entire backstory was everyone talking about how much he loved magic and now suddenly hes Ron version 2.0. Reading is literally the only way he has right to learn magic so why the F is he whining non stop about as if hes actually 11 years old? Where the F did the maturity, that entire first half of the book was about, go?

    But even if he knew how to get in the cheat like room, Ethan wasn't actually very interested in it. He really didn't like reading, and did only the bare minimum for his classes, relying more on his practical experience.
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    Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness
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  • kessu91
    kessu9113d
    Commented

    Armando Dippet... Haah this is some Chinese translation isn't it? With the chicken BS?

    Brantham Fergus
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    Hogwarts: A Magic Elegy
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  • kessu91
    kessu9113d
    Commented

    ???? The war with Grindelwald is supposed to be starting not ending in 1938....

    Dumbledore furrowed his brow. With the war looming, Hogwarts professors had to help on the front lines. Moreover, the recent Wizarding War started by Grindelwald had only just ended, and many ancient family members were left homeless and wandering.
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    Hogwarts: A Magic Elegy
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  • kessu91
    kessu9113d
    Replied to Valen756

    Just to clarify when you look at HP magic it seems they are connected to some primordial force which they channel through themselves to alter reality. This would also explain the need for a wand since their own body acts as a medium making it hard for them to push the magic outside. This would then make the wand/or chanting/or rituals a sort of external path that draws magic from their bodies and allows for greater acts of magic. So it should be a limit of their mind and body that determines the power of a wizard not some random amount of substance they use chunks of to cast spells. Meaning mental strain the more complex the magic is and physical strain when channeling the magic through their body into the wand. Which would make sense why they start with simple spells and repeatedly practice them strengthening their mind for more complex spells and training their bodies tolerance to increase the power they can use.

    'This is going to be a hassle'. That was the last thought I had before my head hit the ground, completely unconscious.
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    Reincarnated Into The World Of Harry Potter
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  • kessu91
    kessu9113d
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    Literally using it for the very reason its bad... Also what Dumbledore? He cast 4 spells and fainted like a basic B. He literally did 10 times that the first time he was practicing his dueling. Its a cliche overused anime plot device to skip scenes while making it seems like the MC gave his all. Except that when used like this it just makes him look weak and pathetic for no reason. Also you never explained how your magic system works. Because this doesn't seem like HP system. More like some mage from an RPG with a manapool...

    'This is going to be a hassle'. That was the last thought I had before my head hit the ground, completely unconscious.
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    Reincarnated Into The World Of Harry Potter
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  • kessu91
    kessu9113d
    Commented

    Don't do this... This constant "falling unconscious" anime BS is bad. It adds nothing to the story in a situation like this and just makes the MC look weak and pathetic. You don't need to have him faint constantly to show MC is tired out.

    'This is going to be a hassle'. That was the last thought I had before my head hit the ground, completely unconscious.
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    Reincarnated Into The World Of Harry Potter
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  • kessu91
    kessu9116d
    Replied to patience9704

    This is clearly a machine translation... Well never mind... The MCs names is Fawley or Fowley or something like that. Not Flitwick...

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 Class dismissed.
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    The teacher at Hogwarts is a Dark Lord!
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  • kessu91
    kessu9116d
    Commented

    So why the F did she not kill it first before starting to mutilate it?

    Although I did not with to hurt any animals if I wanted it grow stronger I had no choice. Raising my hand I began to gauge out its eyes. Being in Satan souls dampens my emotions and I couldn't be more thankful for it. The poor creature squirmed with all its might but it was simply too weak.
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    HP/DC: Satan Soul
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  • kessu91
    kessu9116d
    Commented

    That would have literally crippled him permanently and most likely result in his children eating him............

    Even so the giant spider was low and before he could even call for his children I had already remove 4 of his legs. Quickly I cortiriased the bleeding and shoved them in a poach which had an extneeded space charm on.
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    HP/DC: Satan Soul
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  • kessu91
    kessu9116d
    Commented

    At least Fix the name.....

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 Class dismissed.
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    The teacher at Hogwarts is a Dark Lord!
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  • kessu91
    kessu9121d
    Commented

    Isn't the demon part already like another soul inside of her? So she should not have an animagus form to begin with.

    If Mira became and animagus what do you think it be, I don't think I will make her one but if the option wa their what would all you pick.
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    HP/DC: Satan Soul
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  • kessu91
    kessu9121d
    Commented

    Or gun. Every real urban magic caster should have an enchanted revolver that shoots demon killing bullets.

    'Perhaps I could enchant one to be powerful enough to be of some use.' I mused to myself. A wand and a sword would truly be a cool looking combination.
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    Reincarnated Into The World Of Harry Potter
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  • kessu91
    kessu9121d
    Commented

    They lived during the witch hunts. Obviously defensive and attack magic would have been the first things they learned. Not how to turn sticks into needles.

    "Flipendo!" I yelled, aiming at the dummy. Flipendo was a beginner spell that conjured a wall of force that pushed the opponent. Sadly for me, the dummy quickly abandoned the red spell glowing at the tip of his wand and conjured a slightly weaker looking shield than me. I didn't realize he could do shields as well, that was supposed to be a fourth year charm. The only reason I had learned it so early was that it was one of the most important dueling spells I could think of. I mentally reminded myself that the training dummy was a relic of the past and most likely the students had different curriculums back then.
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    Reincarnated Into The World Of Harry Potter
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